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Star-shine, a Senryu
![Visual Poem Star-shine, a Senryu](/images/uploads/poemimages/418876.jpg?1620661775)
Written by
LunaGreyhawk
(Jenn_Leigh)
Published 10th May 2021
Author's Note
Written for the Haiku club’s monthly theme: Joy
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
10th May 2021 5:05pm
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10th May 2021 5:12pm
Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
10th May 2021 5:08pm
Quite nice
I have great admiration for those of you who can publish short style poetry
I have great admiration for those of you who can publish short style poetry
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Re: Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
16th May 2021 3:01pm
Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
10th May 2021 8:26pm
Dear L,
Well this is beautiful. It sings with joy. From the words to the back drop accompanying them. And a new vocab word to boot. Stochastic. Love it. H🌷
Well this is beautiful. It sings with joy. From the words to the back drop accompanying them. And a new vocab word to boot. Stochastic. Love it. H🌷
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Re: Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
16th May 2021 3:01pm
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16th May 2021 3:02pm
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16th May 2021 3:02pm
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Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
13th May 2021 5:25am
The whole package is just a bit of loveliness.... I have such a soft spot for senryú and haiku.... and this just sang, to me! I loved it... so much.
Terrifically penned, Luna
Ty for sharing.
🌹-💙
xo
B
Terrifically penned, Luna
Ty for sharing.
🌹-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
16th May 2021 3:03pm
I love the Senryu for its ability to say so much with so few syllables lol. Thank you so much, Blue 💜.
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13th May 2021 6:38am
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Re. Star-shine, a Senryu
4th Jul 2021 8:18am
Loved the message and color scheme in the image to accompany this wonderful verse. It really leaves us with an uplifting feeling.
Well penned.
Well penned.
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