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Who are you?
what are you?
how different are you?
Are you black?
Are you white?
Do you bleach your skin to look light and do you belive that only your cultural beliefs are right?
Are you straight?
Are you gay ?
Do you just love people anyway?
Are you afraid of being misjudged by the things you wanna say?
Do you believe in God, idols or the devil?
Do you believe that there's a difference between good and evil?
Freedom they say but are we really free ?when we cant really live how we want to or be who we wanna be
we fight to live, we live to fight and how do we know when we are really living life right.
Mentally we are slaves and we dont even realize we are force to live life surrounded by what they instilled in our minds, we live what we learn and we learn every day and we are motivated by what each other say
We got a mind of our own but do we really when cant even control our thoughts sometimes even if it drives us crazy, my words are so bundled as am flustered by the worlds notion that we have many paths before us and we must have to choose one, we either win in this game of life or we frigging loose and I have com to my own conclusion that it is what it is am just living daily until there no more life to live.
what are you?
how different are you?
Are you black?
Are you white?
Do you bleach your skin to look light and do you belive that only your cultural beliefs are right?
Are you straight?
Are you gay ?
Do you just love people anyway?
Are you afraid of being misjudged by the things you wanna say?
Do you believe in God, idols or the devil?
Do you believe that there's a difference between good and evil?
Freedom they say but are we really free ?when we cant really live how we want to or be who we wanna be
we fight to live, we live to fight and how do we know when we are really living life right.
Mentally we are slaves and we dont even realize we are force to live life surrounded by what they instilled in our minds, we live what we learn and we learn every day and we are motivated by what each other say
We got a mind of our own but do we really when cant even control our thoughts sometimes even if it drives us crazy, my words are so bundled as am flustered by the worlds notion that we have many paths before us and we must have to choose one, we either win in this game of life or we frigging loose and I have com to my own conclusion that it is what it is am just living daily until there no more life to live.
Published 6th May 2021
| Edited 27th Jun 2021
Author's Note
We are living in a confusing world and sometimes we dont even know what choices to make because we were told that there a right and there's a wrong and sometimes what's wrong to others seems right to us and what's right to them seem wrong to us so all we have to do is just be what we think the best versions of our selves are
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28th May 2021 00:41am
With each day we come closer and closer to a common fate we all share as humanity.
9th Mar 2022 00:49am
Hello Paige,
You are free spirit like me. I also find the world teaches us how to serve others and please them. Our DNA is now trained as a pet dog or a lion in circus. So I turned to be naturist. Please feel free to read my poems and then contact me for further conversation. I love your revolutionary thoughts and to make your your own path to reach your destination.
Love,
KS
You are free spirit like me. I also find the world teaches us how to serve others and please them. Our DNA is now trained as a pet dog or a lion in circus. So I turned to be naturist. Please feel free to read my poems and then contact me for further conversation. I love your revolutionary thoughts and to make your your own path to reach your destination.
Love,
KS
26th Jun 2022 5:09am
A write that gets the brain going. Some people give a smooth answer as to who they are but then stumble with the "what". Reminds me a bit of Pink Floyd's "Wish You Were Here".
26th Jul 2022 7:52am
Freedom is really just an illusion. I mean the very idea that we think other people in power have our best interest in mind is foolish. But I also think of it as a balance. We need things and the people have to fight for those things. And these are things we pay for in many different ways.
Very good poem. I very much enjoyed 😁
Very good poem. I very much enjoyed 😁
30th Aug 2022 6:51am
Such deep emotional passion in the quest to life's questions and unanswered meanings of reality, causing doubt of one's own existence due geographical and governmental, society an environmental conditioning. Queen please 🙏 keep writing ✍ you are so right ✅ an inspirational 👏 I'm very impressed be safe ok and stay blessed 🙌 🙏
