coincidence of desires.

Desire. What an odd word to describe obsession.- a loop that gets stuck in one's mind/body. Desire has been the motivation for everything from war to love and everything in between. Thought provoking, indeed.
Excellent write, Blue.

hugs,
buddhakitty.  

Your comments are so fantastic... desire /obsession..... in my mind, those two words are kind of like being color blind... I see them both as 'gray'... hahaha... a little bit interchangeable, I suppose. I do appreciate your thoughtfulness and damn, if I don't add ANOTHER check mark to my  "Reasons Blue must have coffee and a long chat with buddhakitty".... checkmark list 📃.... lol

Much love and respect dear bk,
🌹
xo
B

Please don't stop, Lady Blue. I enjoy your poetry very much. I love the imagery in this piece. The implication of this passage is so profoundly romantic,
"and this
this, that was siphoned
from past lives,"
Bravissima, goddess BB🌹💞

I was trying my hand at writing a 'romantic' piece vs the blatantly erotic erotica (which I adore, too!.. hahaha) so, you saying what you did blew me away, BB!! I felt all kinds of inspiration and wonder... So thank you sooo much for that. I'm glad you enjoyed those lines and that they took you to that head / heart space... lol. I am grateful for your visit, the list add and the way you've singlehandedly turned my mood around.... Muchas Gracias, my BB!
Much love and respect,  
🌹 💜 🌹
🐻 ✨ 🐇  
xoxo

The desires of Love bring out the passion, don't ever lose that.  Keep on writing you beautiful sexy woman.

I am hoping to do just that... thanks Francisco
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Nice Blue.  You write beautiful, never stop that passion.

You're very kind, Remy... I hope to do just that. ;)
I thank you for reading and that lovely comment.
You're a good soul.. 🦋
🌹
💙-B

In the midst of writing, I feel the same as your words here.... it's the other 23  hours of the day where I'm wondering what the fuck I'm going to write, that are the bitch... lmao.  
Thanks, Weg ..for the boost ... and the good advice... 🙏🏻  
 
So glad to see you 🦋  
 
🌹- 🐇

Sapphic erotica done tastefully. Very nice. Because, you know, if a guy (well, some guys) tried to write this it wouldn’t be so — what’s the word I’m looking for?— not dainty...sophisticated! Yeah. That’s it. 🙂

I kind of like dainty too... but I'm far from being dainty... I'm more punk rock and Dr Marten than Yo-Yo Ma (love him though.... lol!) and Louis Vuitton...

Sophisticated (with a tinge of goth) ... that's my speed... 😉 Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, always amazing fun there. 😁
I'm very grateful for the list add and just your presence..
Yay!

You're always welcomed here
🌹-💙
B

Well, I mean, most guys would go tab A into slot B three syllables in lol. Punk rock and Louis Vuitton... I can see it lol. You are welcome. Sometimes my thoughts are coherent although my wife would tend to disagree. 😂😉

"because of you  

when the sun
finally rose
delicate hearts
didn't burn
to ash"

sums it up for me.
I wanted to leave it there but my mind had other ideas.... plans.... whatever... lol  

I am so grateful for you and your visit, Ru.  
I adore the lines you've felt most impacted by... in fact, they were intentionally phrased that way... as a sort of tribute or a calling out to the universe....  

Thank you for the generous list add, I cherish that very much and don't take it lightly...  

All my best wishes your way ✨  
🌹 - 💙  
🐶 😍

Oh my word girl. Desire my favourite topic to wrote on  that was beautiful just like the author
It wrapped around me as I read it
Sweetie that was like desire itself, wonderful
Love and light
Ron x

I appreciate your thoughtful comments, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
All smiles that you enjoyed this one... it's me being romantic...or trying anyway.. Lol...  
I hope all is well this morning!  

Much love and respect,
🌹  
xo  
B

I corrected my reply... I accidentally assumed you RL my poem (I'm sooo sorry.... and no pressure... my mistake completely) just wanted you aware I corrected it!
🌹
xo

My dear I'm the one who's sorry I was caught mud write by a visitor and didn't hit the button
I adore your work and always keep them on my read list
Love and light and apologies
Ron xx

Nooooo....... I wasn't meaning for you to do that.... dawwwww ... sincerely!!!

You!
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xo

I never saw unicorns but hey, that's cool. It takes a mind to be completely open to imagine such things.

it's rare, to find this kind of desire -- like a unicorn, kinda rare ... was my thinking on selecting that theme ... plus I really like unicorns...  I also selected it as a shout out, in respect of another poet ....

Thank you for reading, Billy
...any thoughts on the poem itself.. just curious.. lol...
🌹-B

Yeah, you rather like the word, 'happenstance' don't you, lol?

not particularly...
I've used it three times within my poems, I think I'm correct... Once as a title but that poem was deleted awhile ago... Why does that matter though? ... I see poets using certain words over and over and over.... no biggie... huh... I guess that answers my question about the poem... lol...
No worries...Thanks Billy!
-B

It's technically a very good poem, with lots of dreamy phrases & clever word combinations... to answer your question. 😊

Thanks, Billy

Tender ... flowing write ... weaves along with its short lines ... variation in length keeps the reader alert ... engaged ... excellent use of line breaks ... nice spacing to let the poem spread out ... breath ... as the reader/listener exhales ... wonderful uplifting write ...

I think the word tender, has me over the moon!..lol... I really appreciate your in depth summation, LilD. Your feedback is so very helpful and valuable and I am truly grateful for that.

I hope you enjoy your time at the retreat and I thank you again for taking the time to leave me with your thoughts the list add and just some LilD love before you left... Awww.. thx!

Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B

Oh wow! Loved the flow and basked in the beauty of your language.

I really enjoyed reading you comments, LV. They made me smile and brightened my late afternoon, exponentially. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me with your thoughts.

Much love your way...
🌹
xo
-B

Dear BV,

Everything from the above comments...and...this was my favorite passage, not that I play favorites...but...” O' to be felt
realized from within to out
being of each other
known begets known” because to me, when someone knows you inside and out I think there’s a better set of odds that a relationship can survive. Not always, but odds are improved.
Of course, it’s vital to understand I live most of my days in an alternate universe where I’m alone and can’t be disappointed or pissed off by other humans. My view point might be skewered.
More importantly I saw a LV bag on sale. I really want it. I’d have to sell a kidney to buy it but I think it’d be worth it. Don’t worry about the other 23 hours a day. It’s the extremely well used one hour you used to create these diamonds that matters. Great write. H🌷

Methinks that if that Louis Vuitton bag is on sale it's kind of a sign that it's meant to come live with you! .... heh heh heh 😈 🤷🏻‍♀️.... just sayin'

Your ability to fan the flames of the much needed fired under my ass that keeps me motivated, is unparalleled, Dear H. I thank you for that. It's difficult to keep up the momentum and it says a lot when you see something in me, that at times, I cannot. I wholeheartedly appreciate you and your goodness, there. I'm extremely thankful for you, the generous list add, your extremely kind remarks and all your kindness in the support you share /show me.

I adore seeing you 🦋
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B

When you are writing like this there is every reason to keep on keeping on. This is magnificent. You encapsulate sensuality in the passion that rolls like the waves off Oahu with their might in a Beachcomber of tropical desire. The subtleties here find a niche in my being and grow there. Love how your art explores every inch of my masculinity.

Xo
John

Magnificent, he says!.... Ohhh my! I don't think I've ever been called magnificent before! I am so grateful awed and blown away.... ahhh I do like to  burrow into every crevice, tis true .... *wink.... lol!  
My heart soars as I read your words.  
 
I thank your for the list add as well as your confidence and compliments, my dear poet. 🙏🏻  

Your faith in me, well it's truly priceless...  
 
All my warmest regards,  
🌹  
xo  
Susan

Those first 6 lines...really powerful opening, they could just be a short poem. But what a beautiful read, the intense passion and romanticism you have here, I love reading these poems of yours very ethereal and the imagery of two loves in complete connection.
Simply beautiful.

Thanks, Kieron.
Your visits are so pleasurable when I see you 🦋
I appreciate your thoughtful comments and find myself smiling that you fell my little sense of romanticism. My gratitude is heartfelt, for your list add and the time you spend reading my writes.
Much love and respect from across the pond ✨
🌹-💙
xo
B

Yup, you're unstoppable. You weave these pieces beautifully, always capturing  what the human spirit longs to express.

Amazing write.

Unstoppable, he says... hahahaha... hardly... I giggle because I'm totally in the middle of a dry spell (well, for me... lol) and have only really written senryú on the #Nopoo forum lately... lol
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and found something interesting within, dear Wally.

Much love and respect,
🌹 - 💙
B

From our observations from afar, you exhibit tendencies that can be loosely explained as an alternating current (AC) - defined as "an electric current which periodically reverses direction and changes its magnitude continuously with time in contrast to direct current (DC) which flows only in one direction.

You thrive when the emotions and passions flow back and forth from a "partner" be it male or female.  When in only one direction you tend to withdraw and are no longer compatible. However, occasionally you require a DC experience (submission).

Enjoyed the clues you provided of yourself about a year back.  Hope you enjoy my "poetic license" on the lighter side of a detailed review.

xxoo - 0088

I think I'm going to marinate on your superior insights for a while... I will say that you definitely see a lot, dear Leo... 😉

This was also me on my 172nd IN A ROW of posting at least a poem a day on the NoPoo forum. So, to be reminded of that feat, brings thoughts that parts of this poem's motivation is also part of that continued influence, if I remember correctly. It wasn't so straight forward... (perhaps?!)... Hmmm... Food for thought, indeed!

Your investigative skills, leave me to marvel - 💙
😎🕵🏻‍♀️🔍🔎

🌹 - B