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I Like These Things
To be able to slide my body between the thighs of a gorgeous, thick-legged woman and touch that spot deep inside her which sends tremors through her frame
Is the ultimate in personal satisfaction
To hold a beautiful woman in my arms
and kiss her deeply as my hungry, greedy fingers stroke 'cross her clit like a probing mouth 'til she shivers and trembles
Clinging to me like a life raft as uncontrolled muscle contractions spawned of ecstasy race thru her
Crushing her delicious body against me
Is my fondest wish and desire
To place my tongue 'pon her pussy and feel her thighs quiver as they fall open quickly then squeeze shut tightly
with her hands cradling my head as her voice tells the intensity of her pleasure while the sweetness of her nectar cascades over my lips
Is the perfect way to enjoy a magnificent night with a Goddess
Is the ultimate in personal satisfaction
To hold a beautiful woman in my arms
and kiss her deeply as my hungry, greedy fingers stroke 'cross her clit like a probing mouth 'til she shivers and trembles
Clinging to me like a life raft as uncontrolled muscle contractions spawned of ecstasy race thru her
Crushing her delicious body against me
Is my fondest wish and desire
To place my tongue 'pon her pussy and feel her thighs quiver as they fall open quickly then squeeze shut tightly
with her hands cradling my head as her voice tells the intensity of her pleasure while the sweetness of her nectar cascades over my lips
Is the perfect way to enjoy a magnificent night with a Goddess
Published 2nd May 2021
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2nd May 2021 4:40pm
I think it would read sequentially better if the first three lines were inserted immediately before the final line of the poem, so you have the order of embracing, oral pleasuring and insertion. Otherwise, i like the turn of phrase and choice of words.
3rd May 2021 00:30am
Nice to hear from you Brother Solomon
You could be right about the rearranging. But I worry that if I make a change, I'll damage the flow
Luckily, you seem to have caught my drift
You could be right about the rearranging. But I worry that if I make a change, I'll damage the flow
Luckily, you seem to have caught my drift
3rd May 2021 00:00am
Your serenading musings has been very beautiful in its echoing vibe as of late.. mm... moreso, a little spice I can taste on the wind my Melanin King, whereas, us poetesses hear the passion resonating
3rd May 2021 00:31am
2 poems in a row!!
Feeling doubly blessed by your attentions
Thank You
Can't describe how nice this makes me feel
Feeling doubly blessed by your attentions
Thank You
Can't describe how nice this makes me feel
4th May 2021 10:09am
2nd Jul 2021 5:27am
Reminded me of a New Edition or BBD song! My favorite lines: “ with her hands cradling my head as her voice tells the intensity of her pleasure while the sweetness of her nectar cascades over my lips”.
