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Foundation
Father left too young, too soon,
Contently played this earthly game
Mastering
Intellect and emotion.
Mother,
In grief always; paralyzed
Demanding her childrens’ attention.
I, the ugliest mixture of two.
Contently played this earthly game
Mastering
Intellect and emotion.
Mother,
In grief always; paralyzed
Demanding her childrens’ attention.
I, the ugliest mixture of two.
Published 1st May 2021
Author's Note
written for the 30 words about self competition - I love these competitions as they get me writing - wrote this and it made me laugh.
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1st May 2021 5:01pm
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1st May 2021 6:49pm
1st May 2021 6:42pm
Beautiful and simple while saying so much.
"I, the ugliest mixture of two."
Well done.
"I, the ugliest mixture of two."
Well done.
1st May 2021 6:50pm
@Damselinhandcuffs thank you for reading and for your comment. it means a lot as it is exactly what I wanted to portray. I appreciate you, ursa :)
1st May 2021 6:51pm
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2nd May 2021 2:13am
2nd May 2021 9:41pm
Wow ... crisp ... poignant ... powerful ... trying to be matter of fact ... but the ache behind the words ... well poeted ...
2nd May 2021 11:15pm
