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EATING COOKIES
The great shift happens around us
Swirling like sage smoke
Calling to be inside our home
As well inside all we inhabit
So goodbye big bag of semi-sweet
Chocolate chips from Costco
No more partying in that cabinet
With the liquor
On the floor above you
Enjoy your future with Magda
Who leaves tomorrow
She has promised to bring
Chocolate chip cookies
Down in the future
A blessing for all
Of us to share
Swirling like sage smoke
Calling to be inside our home
As well inside all we inhabit
So goodbye big bag of semi-sweet
Chocolate chips from Costco
No more partying in that cabinet
With the liquor
On the floor above you
Enjoy your future with Magda
Who leaves tomorrow
She has promised to bring
Chocolate chip cookies
Down in the future
A blessing for all
Of us to share
Published 25th Apr 2021
Author's Note
EATING COOKIES topic offered by my son Auryn
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25th Apr 2021 6:34pm
hahahahahahaha! I knew the moment I saw the title it HAD to be from one of your kids! I love it! Chocolate chips too! This NaPo has had to be the most fun for you and your family, Kumar! It's certainly been fun to read.
25th Apr 2021 7:27pm
The funny thing is Auryn doesn’t have the sweet tooth his sister and mama have, but I guess everyone loves a good cookie! Thanks Aha.
27th Apr 2021 11:35am
I'm glad you said "chocolate chip cookies" and not 'hobnobs', otherwise some 'woke' person might have chipped in with a 'problematic' about the word hobnobs being 'phallo-centric' 😊
( https://www.realclearpolitics.com/video/2018/06/26/tracey_ullman_hosts_woke_support_group_on_bbc_show.html )
( https://www.realclearpolitics.com/video/2018/06/26/tracey_ullman_hosts_woke_support_group_on_bbc_show.html )
