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I Dream
I dream
of all I should not
desire
oh, ever tempting lust -
how I
love
to play with
fire.
This hunger
I would love to
feed.
One night with you -
is all I
need.
Intense
cravings
to savour you.
It'll be so
bitter-sweet.
I daydream
all those
naughty things
you'll do to me.
Such a tease!
This eroticism,
I can't
I won't
fight.
No holding back,
I'm going
with the flow.
To my
body,
You are -
Essential.
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16th Feb 2012 3:46pm
Original version, previously entered in a Comp.
This is a newly edited version.
This is a newly edited version.
re: Dream
Anonymous
16th Feb 2012 4:56pm
cherry_blossom,
Don't you love it when you finally give into the fire and let the daydreams swallow you whole. ; ) enjoyed!
tornado
Don't you love it when you finally give into the fire and let the daydreams swallow you whole. ; ) enjoyed!
tornado
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re: re: Dream
16th Feb 2012 5:12pm
tornado,
It's one of the best feelings ever experienced ;)
Thanks for stopping by!
It's one of the best feelings ever experienced ;)
Thanks for stopping by!
Internal flame
17th Feb 2012 8:12am
Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. Atleast that what I got out of it. Love, love this write. Kudos
Ms Blossom!
Ms Blossom!
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re: Internal flame
17th Feb 2012 7:51pm
Atropabelladonna,
You got it! 'deep-burning and unquenchable'
I am so very happy that you enjoyed this piece.
Esp. love your take on it.
:)
You got it! 'deep-burning and unquenchable'
I am so very happy that you enjoyed this piece.
Esp. love your take on it.
:)
Reads
17th Feb 2012 8:15am
I just want to say; how is it that 173 ppl can read this and not have a comment. I guess 171of them got nothing from it or they...I will hold my tongue.
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re: Reads
17th Feb 2012 7:54pm
Man you are def. reading my mind on this lol
Maybe it didn't touch them, maybe they didn't like it ...:::shrugs:::... lol I write poetry for me and it is a great compliment when I can touch others with my words but I gotta respect others opinion or should I say lack of? lol
Maybe it didn't touch them, maybe they didn't like it ...:::shrugs:::... lol I write poetry for me and it is a great compliment when I can touch others with my words but I gotta respect others opinion or should I say lack of? lol
re: re: Reads
17th Feb 2012 9:10pm
When people see any baby; they comment "how cute". When people see a accident they are in "aw,rubber necking". But when they see art...some just look and even stare; turn their head to the side to the other, and walk away without saying a word. Excuse me but I don't give a shit what people think. You are a great writer. As long as you write: you will will ALWAYS get a comment from me. Good or bad. Kudos my dear friend
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LOVELY
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2012 2:44am
Beautiful poem...flows like honey!!!!!
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re: LOVELY
22nd Feb 2012 2:53am
Conjures up old, old school groove!
With my brother being 11 years older, I couldn't help but think of Teddy Pendergrass singing "Love TKO", when I read this. You know that perhaps you should slow things down, but can't...
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re: Conjures up old, old school groove!
28th Feb 2012 4:20pm
I must say I love your feedback!! :)
You can sense that I use music as my inspiration.
Thank you so very much as always
You can sense that I use music as my inspiration.
Thank you so very much as always
........
Anonymous
28th Feb 2012 5:05pm
very much enjoyed cherry blossom!
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nice
29th Feb 2012 6:14am
Re: I Dream
6th Oct 2012 2:42am
Outstanding poem. Love the way the structure guides the meter along with a nice flow all the way through. Very stimulating without being dirty, and so very real for a dream... JJ
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Re: I Dream
9th Oct 2012 7:18am
Re: I Dream
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21st Nov 2012 4:46am
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Re: I Dream
18th Feb 2013 3:18pm
FANTABULOUS PIECE SWEETS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Enjoyed the read Ms. Cherry!!
Rock that pen!!
Sir Lancelott
Enjoyed the read Ms. Cherry!!
Rock that pen!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: I Dream
8th Oct 2013 4:37am
God I wish y would something new, becuz ur older stuff is amazing n I bet ur ven vetted now! Outstanding ink !
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