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Two Comets
these insecurities get the best of me
please, set my mind at ease
make me believe through your touch
that I’m the only one you’re thinking of
forever, and to be continued...
(if you kiss me
i’ll kiss you more
if you say you don’t have feelings
then you don’t have a soul)
if today isn't enough
to show you how much I care
then I’ll try again tomorrow
it’s only you who I desire
can’t kick the habit
I’m a downright addict
when it comes to your loving
forever, and to be continued...
(you are my celebrity
my inspirational speech
the rhythm that keeps me moving
when life has been crippling)
this jealousy is hard to deal with
guess I’m a selfish prick
I need your devotion
and I don’t care who knows it
once you sold your love to me
I claim ownership
forever, and to be continued...
(we are two comets
on a collision course towards each other
aware of our impending doom
binded together by our burning passion)
please, set my mind at ease
make me believe through your touch
that I’m the only one you’re thinking of
forever, and to be continued...
(if you kiss me
i’ll kiss you more
if you say you don’t have feelings
then you don’t have a soul)
if today isn't enough
to show you how much I care
then I’ll try again tomorrow
it’s only you who I desire
can’t kick the habit
I’m a downright addict
when it comes to your loving
forever, and to be continued...
(you are my celebrity
my inspirational speech
the rhythm that keeps me moving
when life has been crippling)
this jealousy is hard to deal with
guess I’m a selfish prick
I need your devotion
and I don’t care who knows it
once you sold your love to me
I claim ownership
forever, and to be continued...
(we are two comets
on a collision course towards each other
aware of our impending doom
binded together by our burning passion)
Published 18th Apr 2021
Author's Note
A older poem I wanted to update. Hope people enjoy 😁
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15th May 2021 6:08am
15th May 2021 9:08am
Haha, not always. I got the idea after reading what would happen if two comets hit. It said that they could hit then mend together. Kind of thought it was romantic in away lol.
15th May 2021 12:34pm
