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Dissociative Dichotomy, the Musical
the crescendo of
silence,
disjointed, dismembered
deafening
in the
(floating)
black hole space
where
ears play dead on
repeat
repeat
repeat
high-pitched
hushhhhhhhhh
rides smoothly
upon (above, atop)
the broad back
of trembling contralto;
white noise nonsense
flows glissando
in B-flat major,
with relentless
lack of
purpose;
there is only
nothing,
and also everything;
all at once,
an unexpected
cadenza
silence,
disjointed, dismembered
deafening
in the
(floating)
black hole space
where
ears play dead on
repeat
repeat
repeat
high-pitched
hushhhhhhhhh
rides smoothly
upon (above, atop)
the broad back
of trembling contralto;
white noise nonsense
flows glissando
in B-flat major,
with relentless
lack of
purpose;
there is only
nothing,
and also everything;
all at once,
an unexpected
cadenza
Published 18th Apr 2021
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18th Apr 2021 7:10pm
I love you choice of stanza breaks and how they make me read it all differently.
This also sparked my curiosity on what note common static would be. 😅
But i think i can relate to this quite well. Or at least the feelings it gives me. The world as i know and live it are everything i have and everything to me. Yet, alot of times it feels so empty.
This also sparked my curiosity on what note common static would be. 😅
But i think i can relate to this quite well. Or at least the feelings it gives me. The world as i know and live it are everything i have and everything to me. Yet, alot of times it feels so empty.
18th Apr 2021 7:58pm
I both hate and love that you understand ❤️. Thank you for reading and for sharing so I feel less alone.
20th Apr 2021 3:23am
20th Apr 2021 12:41pm
31st May 2021 3:36am
The words not only draw us in emotionally but also depict the images of a great void of silence. It's a very compelling piece Luna.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
31st May 2021 4:17pm
