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Roommates
You managed to ruin another day for me
how much more can I take before I kill you?!
I’ve already done it in my mind, many many
times, and yet, here you are...
I wish you would go away somewhere
catch Covid and die.
Or maybe walk into on coming traffic??
I really don’t care which way you go,
just go...
I can see why some women
poison their husbands, even pay
a hitman to beat em then kill em.
Or just eliminate
the middleman altogether
💥
it could happen...
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 13th Apr 2021
| Edited 26th Jan 2023
Author's Note
Dedicated to Jr.
Copyright © 2021 M. Doucette
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Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 1:42am
Re: Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 3:07am
Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 1:44am
I won't even go into the torture porn fantasies I had of the ex...I could probably write a really good scene for the Hostel or Saw movies... So I fully empathize... Big time.
Hang in there!! You can do it.
This piece is really great though. Your honesty won't just resonate with me, that's for sure!
You're killing it, Jackie! (pun intended!)
🌹
xoxo
BB
💙
Hang in there!! You can do it.
This piece is really great though. Your honesty won't just resonate with me, that's for sure!
You're killing it, Jackie! (pun intended!)
🌹
xoxo
BB
💙
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Re: Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 3:11am
Yeah no doubt , I’m sure a lot of women feel this way eh? Lol I mean obviously I would never do it, at least not physically, so for now I’ll keep killing him in my head till he’s dead ..
thanks for the list babe
Always
Jackie xo ♥️♥️
thanks for the list babe
Always
Jackie xo ♥️♥️
Re: Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 3:12am
Hi FeNyx, btw you are in the new story I’m writing it’s coming 👍🏻🤗♥️ Hope you don’t mind.
Hugs
Jackie 🌹
Hugs
Jackie 🌹
Re: Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 3:15am
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13th Apr 2021 4:07am
Re. Roommates
Dear J,
Is it bad that I love this write so hard? Blood soaked brilliant. Of course I’m really sorry that things are topsy turvy and the emotional toll it’s taking is brutal, I really hope this resolves sooner as opposed to later. The raw intense truth of this write though...fantastic! H🌷
Is it bad that I love this write so hard? Blood soaked brilliant. Of course I’m really sorry that things are topsy turvy and the emotional toll it’s taking is brutal, I really hope this resolves sooner as opposed to later. The raw intense truth of this write though...fantastic! H🌷
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Not at all LOL I actually was counting on it🤣
Yeah at the beginning of the end or the middle of the end actually, it is what it is. I don’t wanna try anymore I’m tired of the___, I’m just tired.
Loves you see you tonight 🤗
Jackie xo ♥️♥️
Yeah at the beginning of the end or the middle of the end actually, it is what it is. I don’t wanna try anymore I’m tired of the___, I’m just tired.
Loves you see you tonight 🤗
Jackie xo ♥️♥️
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Re: Re. Roommates
You are so adorable 🥰 this is about my 6 year relationship with my soon to be Xs and the bullshit that’s been going on. And I’m done.
Btw Johnny Rotten is my soon to be Xs gaming name I have one too it’s Sarah Good 😌
Love peace and hugs
Loves you RiAN
Jackie ♥️
Btw Johnny Rotten is my soon to be Xs gaming name I have one too it’s Sarah Good 😌
Love peace and hugs
Loves you RiAN
Jackie ♥️
Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 4:47pm
BAM! This perfectly highlights the mindset women are pushed to under domestic violence. I do hope things improve for you soon, Jackie. You deserve a life filled with joy and happiness.
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Re: Re. Roommates
13th Apr 2021 8:57pm
I feel like this should be a Hallmark card lol
yeah well it’s not physical abuse but verbal.
Things are gonna get better because I’m making them better thanks for the visit Ava.
Hug
Jackie ♥️
yeah well it’s not physical abuse but verbal.
Things are gonna get better because I’m making them better thanks for the visit Ava.
Hug
Jackie ♥️
Re. Roommates
14th Apr 2021 1:22am
Jackie, you unleashed your suffering through words that screamed and roared. I can understand your need to vent this way. When someone puts you through torture letting off steam can be the only way to stay sane. And I must say you did it well here. The sheer ferocity here is astounding. You showed clear as a bell that women are not all sugar and spice and all things nice. Love how you blew that cliches to bits.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re: Re. Roommates
14th Apr 2021 2:48pm
Hello good morning John, sometimes I write strait from the hip.. I mean my life sucks right now but certainly not this Extreme. Not everything I write is about me, but my perspective. I think poetry is subjective and I try to write so that whoever reads can relate to their own life in whatever mood the poem is , subject :)
You are a good man and friend . Hope your day is a good one .
Always your sister Jackie♥️
You are a good man and friend . Hope your day is a good one .
Always your sister Jackie♥️