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your door
Is it your need
to be needed
for you
to streach out
on life’s floor
to try to find
that comfortable
spot
to wait
for the one
who will come
through your door
to be needed
for you
to streach out
on life’s floor
to try to find
that comfortable
spot
to wait
for the one
who will come
through your door
Published 15th Feb 2012
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16th Feb 2012 4:08am
You can't lay there as long as you want. However the door swings Botha ways. I'm sure that their too is laying on the floor waiting! Great verses I really enjoyed the poem; for I feel the same way.
16th Feb 2012 11:21am
ive been laying on that floor for more years then i care to remmber such is life thank you for reading
16th Feb 2012 1:14pm
They say that good things come to those who wait; for some it comes late. I too have been waiting for years. It's not who I want to hold. I wondering who is wanting to hold me. Like the old band " Sargent Peppers Lonly Heats Club "
16th Feb 2012 8:26pm
