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'Self-conceived' love in a twisted mind
Leave your shadow on the wall
your scent in my pillow
stains on my sheet
forgotten clothes on my floor.
Our photos on the ground.
your secrets for me to find,
like a pirate on waves looking for your treasure.
I want the key to your heart, win you over.
Please leave your shadow on my wall
Let me smell you, even when you disappear through the window.
your lips on a empty bottle,
a sweet reminder of your tenderness.
Let me get to know you, like you know my body.
Every inch, every bend.
It's still on my mind,
those passionate nights.
Hours are slowly ticking by,
as the roses, your roses are withered.
You are my secret,
my biggest secret in life.
Hidden from the world,
deep in my soul for no-one ever to find.
Old love doesn't disappear quickly,
I cry...
Please come back & save me
Cause this pirate lost herself,
in high waves.
your scent in my pillow
stains on my sheet
forgotten clothes on my floor.
Our photos on the ground.
your secrets for me to find,
like a pirate on waves looking for your treasure.
I want the key to your heart, win you over.
Please leave your shadow on my wall
Let me smell you, even when you disappear through the window.
your lips on a empty bottle,
a sweet reminder of your tenderness.
Let me get to know you, like you know my body.
Every inch, every bend.
It's still on my mind,
those passionate nights.
Hours are slowly ticking by,
as the roses, your roses are withered.
You are my secret,
my biggest secret in life.
Hidden from the world,
deep in my soul for no-one ever to find.
Old love doesn't disappear quickly,
I cry...
Please come back & save me
Cause this pirate lost herself,
in high waves.
Published 10th Apr 2021
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10th Aug 2021 10:38am
Your words sear urgent and perfect into my psyche. I swear I can feel each syllable like a welcomed familiar dagger... piercing into my own kinship of understanding or seriously deep empathy.... Just fucking, wow!
You completely blow me away....There's such smart, aching cleverness... I don't know whether to tear up or breathe in, such a sigh of relief. I feel truly fortunate to read such amazingly crafted, quality writing... the kind I hope and have long searched for, here is on DU.
Thank you for sharing it... Please, I implore and encourage you to definitely share more more more... if possible 🙆🏻♀️
know that I myself... Well, I'm a total built in audience... haha...
I hope you are doing well... ✨
🌹 - B
You completely blow me away....There's such smart, aching cleverness... I don't know whether to tear up or breathe in, such a sigh of relief. I feel truly fortunate to read such amazingly crafted, quality writing... the kind I hope and have long searched for, here is on DU.
Thank you for sharing it... Please, I implore and encourage you to definitely share more more more... if possible 🙆🏻♀️
know that I myself... Well, I'm a total built in audience... haha...
I hope you are doing well... ✨
🌹 - B
16th Aug 2021 6:41pm
I had my attention a little of the site, through life and everything it throws at us sometimes. But now that I read your comment, it does encourage me to relax and write again.. Thank you for your wonderful response!
