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Fringe
Dancing in the down frequencies of shadows
Making the stars crash
just because we could
You walked right through me
( Shake.. it.. off.. )
We wrote our own script
Set in slow motion
cause that's all we knew
Deconstructing the preconceived notions of how love should be
( I can still feel you on my finger's tips.. )
When the road beckons
calling to carve your own path
( Dare to risk, to dream..)
Lost in that feeling
I'll wait for you
Making the stars crash
just because we could
You walked right through me
( Shake.. it.. off.. )
We wrote our own script
Set in slow motion
cause that's all we knew
Deconstructing the preconceived notions of how love should be
( I can still feel you on my finger's tips.. )
When the road beckons
calling to carve your own path
( Dare to risk, to dream..)
Lost in that feeling
I'll wait for you
Published 21st Jan 2010
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21st Jan 2010 12:07pm
... at full stretch - in tune with your emotions, Kandice - each word placed like a little jewel.
21st Jan 2010 6:55pm
16th Feb 2012 10:43pm
Manic, affectionate and all over the place! i dig it! almost like that rush we get rite when we see a hotie :) all at once and in a rush... () were like thoughts within a thoughts! kinda reminds me of inception... existence in layers parallel perceptions.
22nd Mar 2012 3:32am
