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Sultan's Coffee Girl
Sultan’s Coffee Girl
Boho wide leg harem trousers
Drape feminine finery
With stars afloat in a purple sky
Pants fit for a Sultan’s daughter
Who keeps her demeanor reserved
As a woman of the court must
Lest her master get jealous
And dress her in pauper’s rags
She pours her soul into cups
Of demitasse mien
Boho wide leg harem trousers
Drape feminine finery
With stars afloat in a purple sky
Pants fit for a Sultan’s daughter
Who keeps her demeanor reserved
As a woman of the court must
Lest her master get jealous
And dress her in pauper’s rags
She pours her soul into cups
Of demitasse mien
Published 26th Mar 2021
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26th Mar 2021 9:37pm
Love this ... great flow ... full of plump words ... the last line was manifique ...
26th Mar 2021 9:54pm
Coming from a master of the English language such as you that means the world to me. I had just had coffee served to me by the woman who became my muse. As I walked across the campus to catch the bus home this poem evolved in my mind. Very glad you enjoyed my darling friend.
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John
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John
27th Mar 2021 8:46am
27th Mar 2021 4:39pm
Thanks so much, faithmairee. Adore your enthusiasm for my poem. Waking up to your comment is truly grand, my friend.
John
John
I love this description. I feel like part of the garment has laced around me.
28th Mar 2021 7:22am
The garment being laced around you is the most creative comment I've read on my work. Truly inventive. I thank you from my heart and soul.
Xo
John
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John
28th Mar 2021 4:45pm
28th Mar 2021 4:55pm
I do so love that this was warm, sensual, and subtle for you my darling friend. You make me feel warm with your words. :)
XoXoXo
John
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John
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- Edited 22nd Jul 2022 4:45pm
29th Mar 2021 8:03pm
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29th Mar 2021 8:32pm
~Osem~ glad you love these writes. Your appreciation makes me a happy boy.
John
John
