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15th Mar 2021 3:11pm
Great job with the line breaks in this ... had me rereading it over and over again ...
15th Mar 2021 10:05pm
I enjoyed the flow - I do really need to think about content though - this was dashed out a bit
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15th Mar 2021 5:25pm
"Where spring dreams play a part and the bright sun is warming up our garden." Ah,what a lovely image!
15th Mar 2021 10:19pm
that was the dominant thing - a sunny loving celebration of winter coming to its end
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15th Mar 2021 10:20pm
I love that feeling of flow - but it does allow the content to be whisper thin - which isn't where I should be
16th Mar 2021 2:59am
The soft touch of your mate has you tingling inside your soul. Keep on writing.
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25th Mar 2021 2:21am
One of my favorites of yours. You do sunshine and joy as well as the darker side. This is truly sublime.
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John
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John
25th Mar 2021 9:56am
