pump [case study 20210313:07:45:01] she interjects

There was something unpolished about this that was endearing. It doesn’t give a fuck about grammar or form and that kind of echoes through the whole piece.  

One thing I liked from a geeky perspective — if you note the time there

7+4+5+1= 17
1+7 = base number of 8

8 being infinity which adds this permanent tone to your words, despite the title. Probably wasn’t intentional, but I am eternally the person that looks below the surface in poems.  

Thank you for sharing.  

-M

Edit: I believe you may have just changed the time and now this comment is bollocks.

Heh, I liked your connection with infinity so much I reverted to the original title. Sometimes it's best not to fuck with inspiration. Thanks heaps for sharing your thoughts.

A compelling case indeed. Hope you're doing alright, mate.

It takes a certain kind of self awareness to rip yourself raw on the page in such powerful brevity. It's a rarity.