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A Girl
Crystal lakes inside soulless eyes,
Snow melting on limbs of weakness,
Fiery gold cascading from overhead,
A pinch of “self hate”
A pinch of “self questioning”
A pinch of “Bad Mistakes”
Scars from the sharpest words,
Sexualization from a young age,
Just to be labeled “Jail bait”,
This is what makes me, a Girl.
Snow melting on limbs of weakness,
Fiery gold cascading from overhead,
A pinch of “self hate”
A pinch of “self questioning”
A pinch of “Bad Mistakes”
Scars from the sharpest words,
Sexualization from a young age,
Just to be labeled “Jail bait”,
This is what makes me, a Girl.
Published 7th Mar 2021
Author's Note
Reflecting on how many times I was sexualized and or called jail bait as a young teen.
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7th Mar 2021 8:05pm
Dear BN,
Your poem made me think how very unsettling that had to have been and how that shaped your thoughts and behaviors. Your poem has a lot to say about manners and appropriate actions taken by others. This is a loaded write in such a brief poem. Well written. Welcome to DU. H🌷
Your poem made me think how very unsettling that had to have been and how that shaped your thoughts and behaviors. Your poem has a lot to say about manners and appropriate actions taken by others. This is a loaded write in such a brief poem. Well written. Welcome to DU. H🌷
I am still letting the words of your poem sink in, BN. It's such an impactful subject matter, steeped in poignant brevity. Even your title pulls at me and has me aching... This brave piece, says a lot about your strength and resilience. I appreciate that difficulty and I thank you for sharing. (sending peaceful vibes)
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here.
Nice to meet you :)
🌹
-B
Welcome to DUP
I hope you enjoy your time here.
Nice to meet you :)
🌹
-B
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10th Mar 2021 1:12am
what comes from the past be good or bad what makes who we are to day as it said it is only words ether you take to heart or let them roll off your back like water on a ducks bacl
well done
well done
