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MEMORIES SLAYED
MEMORIES SLAYED
Midnight magick melds and mingles
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of never-ending mystery
Solemn silence screams persistence
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering like yesterday
Dead like yesterday
archetype23Written by archetype23
Published 16th Jan 2020
Midnight magick melds and mingles
Evening's tragic hands-held tingles
Moments upon moments forever vow
Over the eternal moments of now
Reveries of destiny
Inside the fading rest of me
Evoking a moment that will always be
Some joke of never-ending mystery
Solemn silence screams persistence
Laughter lingering in the distance
All that is still still fails to stay
Yesterday still torn away
Evening flickering like yesterday
Dead like yesterday
archetype23Written by archetype23
Published 16th Jan 2020
Published 4th Mar 2021
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5th Mar 2021 00:21am
In all its splendid glory.. I truly comprehend this … your mind is .. I am trying to find the correct word, I have it, unfiltered and that is the hidden beauty of it.. carry on
10th Mar 2021 1:12am
For you , good sir , very interesting rhyming write...
Could have thought it was another member's...
Then I got to the finishing line...
And my thought ?
No , that is his...lol
Well written...and finished !
Could have thought it was another member's...
Then I got to the finishing line...
And my thought ?
No , that is his...lol
Well written...and finished !
10th Mar 2021 9:23am
Thank you all for your comments. I always write
my original work from my heart
and my soul.......
my original work from my heart
and my soul.......
