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It Didn't Mean Anything
I saw you-
there on the street
your hand on her face
too intimate a gesture
between colleagues
when I asked, you said
it didn't mean anything
Now, every word you've ever said
lives on in that vacuum
of meaningless anythings
there on the street
your hand on her face
too intimate a gesture
between colleagues
when I asked, you said
it didn't mean anything
Now, every word you've ever said
lives on in that vacuum
of meaningless anythings
Published 26th Feb 2021
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2021 7:20pm
Hello there.
I really enjoyed this piece — it was short and impactful, and the brevity shown here is really quite marvellous. I love that the interpretation of the nothing is left entirely in the hands of the reader. That’s a total joy.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to the DU.
-M
I really enjoyed this piece — it was short and impactful, and the brevity shown here is really quite marvellous. I love that the interpretation of the nothing is left entirely in the hands of the reader. That’s a total joy.
Thank you for sharing and welcome to the DU.
-M
3rd Mar 2021 8:45pm
Ohhh my.... this penetrates completely and your last line pushed the dagger all the way through.... such a tremendous punch this packs.
Very nicely penned.
Welcome to DUP
*tips my hat
🌹
Very nicely penned.
Welcome to DUP
*tips my hat
🌹
15th Mar 2021 6:01pm
