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Path of confusion
I am on this unknown path,
A hot sun shining on my back,
forks in the road at every turn,
I chose one, another lesson learnd,
Love, hurt and pain,
weathers cloudy looks like rain,
I can cry in the rain no one would care,
I always feel like pulling out my hair,
To be happy and full of life is what I seek,
I work so hard that Im starting to feel weak,
Maybe I try to hard I should just let it all go,
I could stop feeling so Low.
A hot sun shining on my back,
forks in the road at every turn,
I chose one, another lesson learnd,
Love, hurt and pain,
weathers cloudy looks like rain,
I can cry in the rain no one would care,
I always feel like pulling out my hair,
To be happy and full of life is what I seek,
I work so hard that Im starting to feel weak,
Maybe I try to hard I should just let it all go,
I could stop feeling so Low.
Published 11th Feb 2012
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11th Feb 2012 7:01pm
Path of confusion
Defense on the issue of
By saying
I am on this path is unknown,
Hot sun shining on my back,
Forks in the road at every turn,
Evidence of the power of what was going through
But your description is easy
Simple to take your
And says
I chose one, last learnd the lesson,
Love, hurt and pain,
But prefer to walk out of the horrors of what it feels like
Employment of the words come from your heart
Covering, and the moments pass your
By saying
Cloudy skies like rain,
I can not cry in the rain no one cares,
But I am interested in the names of
The sky come for you
and cry for your soul and heart
And you cry
And making wet
And washing for your soul
Maybe find something
But
The nightmare does not end
Where it says
I always feel like pulling my hair,
But the power of what you
To be happy and full of life is what I seek,
Despite feeling weak
But filming scenes of the poem
Indicates the weakness of my body only
Because you say
I work hard so im starting to feel weak,
I may try that it is difficult for me to let everything go,
Can I stop feeling so low.
In the end we come out with something strong
Real strong and effective
And fun
Another wonderful work
Thank you
Defense on the issue of
By saying
I am on this path is unknown,
Hot sun shining on my back,
Forks in the road at every turn,
Evidence of the power of what was going through
But your description is easy
Simple to take your
And says
I chose one, last learnd the lesson,
Love, hurt and pain,
But prefer to walk out of the horrors of what it feels like
Employment of the words come from your heart
Covering, and the moments pass your
By saying
Cloudy skies like rain,
I can not cry in the rain no one cares,
But I am interested in the names of
The sky come for you
and cry for your soul and heart
And you cry
And making wet
And washing for your soul
Maybe find something
But
The nightmare does not end
Where it says
I always feel like pulling my hair,
But the power of what you
To be happy and full of life is what I seek,
Despite feeling weak
But filming scenes of the poem
Indicates the weakness of my body only
Because you say
I work hard so im starting to feel weak,
I may try that it is difficult for me to let everything go,
Can I stop feeling so low.
In the end we come out with something strong
Real strong and effective
And fun
Another wonderful work
Thank you
