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A Column of Insufficiency
I keep
trying.
Why?
I will
never
be the
thing
they
want.
Let's
just go
away.
I don't
want
to try
any
more.
And
all my
many
me's
said
yes.
Let's
go.
Retreat.
Now.
We will
never
be
enough.
trying.
Why?
I will
never
be the
thing
they
want.
Let's
just go
away.
I don't
want
to try
any
more.
And
all my
many
me's
said
yes.
Let's
go.
Retreat.
Now.
We will
never
be
enough.
Published 11th Feb 2012
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11th Feb 2012 4:51pm
13th Feb 2012 00:42am
Gibran
Beautiful.:)
The form, the minimalism
and the approach. Top notch.
The ending is brilliant.
The 'many mes' was special.
A great write,
S'
Beautiful.:)
The form, the minimalism
and the approach. Top notch.
The ending is brilliant.
The 'many mes' was special.
A great write,
S'
13th Feb 2012 4:45am
Thank you, both. I appreciate the feedback. Just wanted to try something different.
