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"But Really I..." (NoPoo 102)
in my
twisted mind
i wish for
that cloak
of darkness
invisibility
stealh deflection
off the radar
be lost
in the expanse
of silence
instinctive
avoidance
becone buried
in shifting sands
Like an ostrich
no discernable
image or footprint
hidden identity
like a breath
in the wind
fearing
simple
connection
a hermit crab
scurrying
from predators
that demand
conversation
the only
contradiction is
i sercetly
desire it
in some sense
twisted mind
i wish for
that cloak
of darkness
invisibility
stealh deflection
off the radar
be lost
in the expanse
of silence
instinctive
avoidance
becone buried
in shifting sands
Like an ostrich
no discernable
image or footprint
hidden identity
like a breath
in the wind
fearing
simple
connection
a hermit crab
scurrying
from predators
that demand
conversation
the only
contradiction is
i sercetly
desire it
in some sense
Published 21st Feb 2021
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21st Feb 2021 3:08pm
21st Feb 2021 3:13pm
I think because I'm a such a fan of your romantic pieces that I kind of forget how you can sear deep with the introspection. This write, makes me feel your incognito desire to connect and be seen, despite how hard and scary that might be. That's just like
us all, though, innit? (yes on a bigger scale, I know... but still )... I can see with some hope and a bit of educated understanding, we can be a little more united as human beings, within this context at least.... just sayin' ;)
Yes - I'm always hopeful, indeed 🌈
So nicely penned, C
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹
xo
us all, though, innit? (yes on a bigger scale, I know... but still )... I can see with some hope and a bit of educated understanding, we can be a little more united as human beings, within this context at least.... just sayin' ;)
Yes - I'm always hopeful, indeed 🌈
So nicely penned, C
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏
🌹
xo
21st Feb 2021 7:41pm
21st Feb 2021 10:57pm
i realize that this spill is about how You (often and / or all the time) Feel,
but literally there's no way i would let You BE this way, Brother
but literally there's no way i would let You BE this way, Brother
