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What we're told
Never question what was said.
The expected choice of path to tread.
Heed what is known and what is read.
To make for an apt and clear head.
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
The expected choice of path to tread.
Heed what is known and what is read.
To make for an apt and clear head.
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Published 10th Feb 2012
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11th Feb 2012 2:56am
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11th Feb 2012 9:30pm
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
You have the power rhetorical
Everyone has plenty of mystery
There is a lot of code
And secrets
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Perhaps the day will come
And everyone starts strongly Shuttle
To astronomy and space
To start something else
Another transmission or
And other life
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
You have the power rhetorical
Everyone has plenty of mystery
There is a lot of code
And secrets
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Perhaps the day will come
And everyone starts strongly Shuttle
To astronomy and space
To start something else
Another transmission or
And other life
?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
11th Feb 2012 10:21pm
Well it's alot harder to start something than you'd like to believe isn't it lol!!!!!!!!
12th Feb 2012 5:36pm
Great
So they say
Point of view
Or belief
Maybe you're right
And I also
For this
Is
Point of view
Thank you
So they say
Point of view
Or belief
Maybe you're right
And I also
For this
Is
Point of view
Thank you
Anonymous
18th Feb 2012 9:23pm
a brilliant poem
18th Feb 2012 9:28pm
Anonymous
24th Feb 2012 2:56pm
I love your rhyme and meter - so perfect - I enjoy reading poetry such as this - plus it has a nice meaning within the lines - very thought out and penned down - not just words thrown onto a paper like most do that we read on poetry sites - well done my dear - ever so respectfully - ^v^
24th Feb 2012 5:28pm
