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Let's Tango! Trome
Let's Tango! Trome...
This dance is just a miracle!
Everything - poses, gestures, glance ...
A partner whose hands (words) are gentle -
but confidently command, lead, want ...
Passion in everything, and temptation,
And two people dance
The tango rhythm, like an obsession,
And a prayer for things to follow
The clatter of heels and a proud look,
And a step forward and a step back
Interlacing of feet and hands
Oh how passionate hearts clatter
And calesita, and corte,
and boleo, and amage!
Oh tango! In it, affection is assured ...
You win, She is at your feet!
This dance is just a miracle!
Everything - poses, gestures, glance ...
A partner whose hands (words) are gentle -
but confidently command, lead, want ...
Passion in everything, and temptation,
And two people dance
The tango rhythm, like an obsession,
And a prayer for things to follow
The clatter of heels and a proud look,
And a step forward and a step back
Interlacing of feet and hands
Oh how passionate hearts clatter
And calesita, and corte,
and boleo, and amage!
Oh tango! In it, affection is assured ...
You win, She is at your feet!
Author's Note
A big thank you! Trome for those poems where you included or wrote about me. :) I struggled a little with what to write and this was the result so I hope you like it! Sorry it took so long.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/409448-a-simple-kiss/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/409714-my-progress/
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Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 8:34pm
Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 8:45pm
Thanks a lot Ron, I am really happy you liked it! and always appreciate your comments so much. 💃🕺🌟
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 8:54pm
Excellent job dear poetess ... love the specificity ... smooth dare I say tango like flow ... you also capture the desperateness of the tango ... its sad history from the poor quarters of Argentina ... so takes me back to Buenos Aires ... thankfully not the tango lessons ... *ugh* ...
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 9:01pm
Tango like flow, love it! Thank you so much for the awesome comment LDF. I tried to capture that excitement and desperateness so I am very happy that came across for you. Never been to Buenos Aires but I would love to go! 💃🕺🌟
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 9:43pm
Few things in life are more sensual, erotic, and stimulating than dance; this one is beyond average...great. Peace, oral
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 9:57pm
Could not agree more my dear Oral... for me it is always sensual, erotic, and stimulating also. ;) Thank you for the wonderful compliment and with it you stimulated mind even more. X 💃🕺🌟
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 9:58pm
I was down and out
For a couple of days
But this Amazing poem
Really lift My spirits Back up again
Thanks again KRISTINA X😍😎🌷
I WOULD love
TO tango
With you anytime of the day
New poetry Coming soon??? 😄😄
For a couple of days
But this Amazing poem
Really lift My spirits Back up again
Thanks again KRISTINA X😍😎🌷
I WOULD love
TO tango
With you anytime of the day
New poetry Coming soon??? 😄😄
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 10:06pm
That makes me so happy that I could lift your spirits. Maybe my timing on this one was almost just right after all! You are so very welcome and thank you again too.
I knew you would love to dance Trome... The Latin heart always wants to dance, right? ;) Just like mine. 💃🕺🌟
New poetry coming?, I hope so... xo
I knew you would love to dance Trome... The Latin heart always wants to dance, right? ;) Just like mine. 💃🕺🌟
New poetry coming?, I hope so... xo
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 10:35pm
Both you and TROME are super talented
Love reading both of you
Fab tribute
Like
Love reading both of you
Fab tribute
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
16th Feb 2021 10:54pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment for both of us! Really glad you thought this tribute was worthy. Trome has a very unique and playful style that I think is impossible not to love. 💃🕺🌟
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
17th Feb 2021 1:21am
Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
17th Feb 2021 4:49pm
Thanks Francisco, we will have to keep it at a virtual poetic tango because we are both taken! ;) Still, it's always lovely to dance the Tango in any form! 💃🕺🌟
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18th Feb 2021 4:26am
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
18th Feb 2021 6:33am
Querida Kristina, you capture so well the passion and seductive nature of the Tango. Reading the third stana dreaming...Soy guapo milonguero. Salgo a la pista de danza, soy rey del bailongo sino con dos pies izquierdos. I love the mention of the different dance steps and motions, shhhhh...tenía que buscarlos en el diccionario. Bravissima guapa poeta y bailarina❣️❣️
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
18th Feb 2021 1:06pm
Hey GW, I am so happy you feel I was able to capture the passion and seductive nature. It can be difficult to put something so amazing into words. :) And I now know what milonguero means. "King of the dance but with two left feet" lol you are so funny. Sometimes I can make you look up stuff too. :p You are a milonguero with words... 💃🕺🌟
Re. Let's Tango! Trome
18th Feb 2021 7:16pm
It’s really nice to see how one writer aspires another and how this dance was a perfect interpretation of that.
Beautiful work Kristina.
Beautiful work Kristina.
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Re: Re. Let's Tango! Trome
18th Feb 2021 8:49pm
Thank you so much Wally! I was trying to capture just that and I am really thrilled you thought it was perfect interpretation. I appreciate the beautiful compliment very much. 💃🕺🌟