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Haiku - Tall
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 14th Feb 2021
| Edited 18th Feb 2021
Author's Note
As a child I often went camping with my family in redwood forests. One of my favorite memories is laying on the forest floor in my sleeping bag on an old canvas air mattress gazing at the star filled sky framed by these gigantic trees that appeared to reach up and touch the luminaries.
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Re. Haiku - Tall
I'm going to see the redwoods this year, it's a goal of mine! My best friend in the world is moving from Brooklyn to a small town about 2 hours outside of Seattle. I can hardly wait! We're going to a lavender field in the town over and then we're gong to drive down to Redwood National Park, it's about a 7-8 hour drive. She wants me to stay longer so we can go to Vancouver, too (on her north side) which is about a three hour drive... but I REALLY want to stay as long as I can @ Redwood National Park. I don't know if I'll ever be back, and I feel their Majesty, too ... lol... anyway, I truly love this haiku! Beautifully inspiring, crafted and just stunning, BB!
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Much love and respect,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
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Re: Re. Haiku - Tall
15th Feb 2021 7:44pm
Dearest, Blue, Can you swing by Texas and pick me up on your way to Seattle? I'll travel 🤠 i am so glad that you will see the redwoods. Redwood forests are very humbling and peaceful spots. That will be quite a change for your friend Brooklyn to a small Washington town. The silence will probably be deafening at first. Thank you so much Goddess S for reading my work and for the RL. You're awesome ❤️
Re. Haiku - Tall
14th Feb 2021 11:50pm
Re: Re. Haiku - Tall
15th Feb 2021 7:49pm
Dear BK, you encapsulate well what it is that entices me to read and write in the Haiku/Senryu form. I truly appreciate your kind words of encouragement and the hug *big bear hug for y'all*😘
Re. Haiku - Tall
Anonymous
15th Feb 2021 00:24am
I’d give anything to go camping right about now. Thank you for taking me there.
-M
-M
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Re: Re. Haiku - Tall
15th Feb 2021 7:53pm
My pleasure, Lady ❣️❣️ We can't really camp here in this corner of Texas. It's too damn hot and humid during the Summer and the mosquitoes are relentless.
I hope that soon you can get out and camp. it's seems to me that the UK would have some awesome places to camp.
I hope that soon you can get out and camp. it's seems to me that the UK would have some awesome places to camp.
Re: Re. Haiku - Tall
15th Feb 2021 8:39pm
Re. Haiku - Tall
24th Feb 2021 8:41am
It's an amazing feeling of calm, quiet and power standing in that forest
You captured it and a trip I took many years ago ...
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You captured it and a trip I took many years ago ...
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