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The Prophet
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Happiest of Birthdays to my Bestie, JohnnyBlaze! May it be blessed with much love and happiness, my Friend. <3
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Re. The Prophet
Anonymous
10th Feb 2021 1:45pm
It's off to an amazing start Thanks to You! 😊💜xo
And you picked a visual that speaks directly to mah color blindness! What a striking visual to compliment a powerfully poetic interpretation of altruism.
For the Love of Poetry! ❤📄
And you picked a visual that speaks directly to mah color blindness! What a striking visual to compliment a powerfully poetic interpretation of altruism.
For the Love of Poetry! ❤📄
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Re: Re. The Prophet
10th Feb 2021 3:36pm
Ha! That's exactly why I picked that image! And, it vaguely reminded me of Gibran's style as well.
Have a great day! xo
Have a great day! xo
Re. The Prophet
10th Feb 2021 6:48pm
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10th Feb 2021 10:23pm
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10th Feb 2021 10:33pm
Re. The Prophet
11th Feb 2021 3:57pm
this is an interesting definition of prophet. and i quite like it. well done!
i quite like the visual as well, A. You're a pro at such things.
i quite like the visual as well, A. You're a pro at such things.
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Re. The Prophet
11th Feb 2021 6:10pm
Wow, You are really good at choosing pics for your poems. I so love this visual. It goes so well with your piece. 👍👍👍
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Re. The Prophet
11th Feb 2021 7:02pm
Such a superb image that compliments the verse perfectly... n a nice BDay dedication to boot! 😊✌🏾
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11th Feb 2021 9:21pm
Re. The Prophet
11th Feb 2021 11:10pm
Great. Love the final stanza,: yet still believes in goodness despite suffering.
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11th Feb 2021 11:12pm
Re. The Prophet
12th Feb 2021 7:00am
Dear A,
I’ve always admired those that put others before themselves. Especially in the face of adversity. What a special gift. I really like that this poem has made me think about my actions. Cards on the table I could have done better today but! I’ll try again tomorrow. There’s no greater homage or birthday gift from one person to another than the gift of a poem.
H🌷
I’ve always admired those that put others before themselves. Especially in the face of adversity. What a special gift. I really like that this poem has made me think about my actions. Cards on the table I could have done better today but! I’ll try again tomorrow. There’s no greater homage or birthday gift from one person to another than the gift of a poem.
H🌷
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Re: Re. The Prophet
12th Feb 2021 2:48pm
I love your outlook, Honoria! Too many people beat themsleves up for having a bad day, rather than grounding in this moment and looking forward to tomorrow! xo
Re. The Prophet
16th Feb 2021 4:26am
First, happy birthday to JB (I know I'm a little late).
Second, you really capture the essence having hope in that second stanza. I always look forward to reading yours and his pieces, because they always offer hope.
Excellent write.
Second, you really capture the essence having hope in that second stanza. I always look forward to reading yours and his pieces, because they always offer hope.
Excellent write.
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Re: Re. The Prophet
16th Feb 2021 4:30pm
Thank you, Wally. I'm certain he'll be thrilled at your wishes.
I appreciate your observation and happy to know such poetry provides hope.
I appreciate your observation and happy to know such poetry provides hope.