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in the eternal ether
I seek truth he is my guardian
lover of old...wisdom
my secrets to keep behind the veil
gentle understanding dawns
reciprocal love in the copper eternity
the golden kingdom isn't for me
perfect love is falsity in an ever-evolving state
my perspective changes and with it my sense of passion
desire peaks and wanes
pain teaches me many things
I am grateful to him Sadistic lover
honesty is key
to be more me than I've ever been
groomed to be Queen
born to tyranny
I absolve myself for past mistakes
faith...a soul survivor
I believe in myself
Published 7th Feb 2021
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Words that slay me, deep...
"I believe in myself"
What a lovely expression of the twists and turns, growth and change that love can go through.
Beautiful written, Benda.
I was captivated.
.. just wow..
🌹
xo
-B
"I believe in myself"
What a lovely expression of the twists and turns, growth and change that love can go through.
Beautiful written, Benda.
I was captivated.
.. just wow..
🌹
xo
-B
7th Feb 2021 6:56pm
7th Feb 2021 11:27pm
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9th Feb 2021 2:08am
"I believe in myself" is the perfect closure to a poem that begins "I seek truth..."
Definitely masterful
Definitely masterful
11th Feb 2021 2:36pm
11th Feb 2021 2:39pm
good morning Absence I was happy to see you this morning I've missed seeing you about ❤
15th Feb 2021 8:40pm
"perfect love is falsity in an ever-evolving state" is true, looking for perfection will always let us down, let alone it builds false hope. What you said about pain teach(ing) many things is also true.
Excellent verse.
Excellent verse.
