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To: Sweetest Love
We were everything, now we are nothing
Forever you have my heart as I let yours go
Forever you have my heart as I let yours go
Written by
inechoingsilence
Published 3rd Feb 2021
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Re. To: Sweetest Love
3rd Feb 2021 6:33pm
a poignant write that hits right where I feel it the most.. my thoughts are with you... 🙏
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xo
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xo
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Re: Re. To: Sweetest Love
3rd Feb 2021 7:39pm
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3rd Feb 2021 6:35pm
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3rd Feb 2021 6:49pm
Re: Re. To: Sweetest Love
3rd Feb 2021 7:41pm
Have to agree to disagree, there. But that is the subject of another poem for another day - what is forever, what remains so, etc. Blessings, Inecho
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3rd Feb 2021 7:51pm
Re: Re. To: Sweetest Love
4th Feb 2021 6:07pm
Only if you believe that words can be confined to a page. Ever have... a poem, a scrap of a song, that gets stuck in your head and you heard it years and years ago? Or you know if you hear something from [insert time/place/event] you KNOW you'll have [insert emotional/physical reaction here]? Just like that. Words leave their mark, whether on a page, or elsewhere.
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4th Feb 2021 6:07pm
Re. To: Sweetest Love
4th Feb 2021 2:28am
Letting go is one of the most difficult lessons we learn in these earth suits, echo.
However, the pain doesn't last half as long as holding on does. . .
However, the pain doesn't last half as long as holding on does. . .
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Re: Re. To: Sweetest Love
4th Feb 2021 12:30pm
Truer words never spoken, right down to the earth suits. Thank you <3
Re. To: Sweetest Love
4th Feb 2021 10:20am
In a way, this almost feels like an elegy. It feels very much as if they are afterthoughts unsaid. Remnants of love.
I am such a sucker for these short pieces. They communicate pure moments of thought and feeling which I really appreciate.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I am such a sucker for these short pieces. They communicate pure moments of thought and feeling which I really appreciate.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. To: Sweetest Love
4th Feb 2021 1:11pm
Afterthoughts - or first thoughts, but in pure moment where intellect and emotion connected. Appreciate you, thank you <3
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4th Feb 2021 8:39pm