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Meth
I sit back and close my eyes, wondering someday if I will realize.
When I listen I hear cries, when I open my eyes I see darkened skies.
The taste so sweet unable to beat, no longer on my feet.
Nothing is ever so sweet , wondering is this death I meet.
Telling me it's my time, only louder then a dropped dime.
Unable to open my eyes, my troubles giving me a hight five.
Not really caring if I revive, only I have never felt so alive.
I believed all the lies , so now the only one to open my eyes.
When Will You when when you realize
When I listen I hear cries, when I open my eyes I see darkened skies.
The taste so sweet unable to beat, no longer on my feet.
Nothing is ever so sweet , wondering is this death I meet.
Telling me it's my time, only louder then a dropped dime.
Unable to open my eyes, my troubles giving me a hight five.
Not really caring if I revive, only I have never felt so alive.
I believed all the lies , so now the only one to open my eyes.
When Will You when when you realize
Published 3rd Feb 2021
Author's Note
This one is a real old one from when I started writing again original date is
April 24th 2005
April 24th 2005
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3rd Feb 2021 5:22am
You fight your addiction to get better, I believe in you. Keep on writing.
3rd Feb 2021 5:27am
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7th Mar 2021 9:26pm
Thank you hun just something from when I was remembering the days I was messed up but got clean and sober in 2004 and still kicking the recovery thing
7th Mar 2021 12:44pm
Yes stay alive, close your eyes and dream or daydream and write such lovely musings. Thumbs up for fine poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
16th Apr 2021 5:48am
Oh! Such a Perfect Day. Problems all left alone. Reminded me of the infamous song by Lou Reed.
So raw.
So raw.
17th Apr 2021 10:07am
Everyday is a good day just have to look at it from a different light. I just remind myself I woke up so that alone makes for the start of a good day.
17th Apr 2021 10:04am
Nice authentic write ... from one addict to another ... one day at a time ... its been since October 8, 2008 ...
3rd May 2021 8:13am
I can say I don't miss the days where I felt I had to look over my shoulder that's for sure 2004 or me
10th Jun 2021 3:24pm
Never experienced drug addiction so this poem awesomely expresses the challenges and problems of addiction. Hope expressing so neatly helps you get rid of it and prayer helps a lot as well. Kudos !!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
17th Oct 2022 1:20am
The draw of addiction and the trap it catches people in is the double ended sword. What many don't realize is that just making it from day to day finds so many addicted to something, even if not not categorized as an addiction. Hopefully something like writing is an addiction with only positive outcomes for you.
17th Oct 2022 6:08am
It is an addiction that many battle it's been many years since I last used but I won't lie and say it's been easy cause it has been a long hard road to stay clean I've been condemned and ridiculed for my addiction but what people don't think about is what drove me down that path to begin with and fail to see all the progress I have made in my life since then but no matter what people say I will forever be me .
17th Oct 2022 7:58am
20th Apr 2023 2:30am
That is so true and I can say I like the person I am today more than who I was
20th Apr 2023 2:25am
