the odd customer

4 lines that create such a vision. Very nice.

haha. I love Paul and paulesque.  That first couplet captured him perfectly.

fine use of "economy".

i dont know anything about paulesque but i definitely dug the poem.  'door swung loudly like his jaw.'..what a great line.

nice write!

a poet here, pen name dartford

no, this is pure anna_grin and wear it, poet ..   :)