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While I Was Having My Lunch
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While I Was Having My Lunch
I looked across the
room and saw this chick look at
me while she sips her
milkshake.
Written by
Green_Arrow
Published
25th Jan 2021
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Author's Note
This haiku poem is from the point of view of a man who has seen something while he eats his lunch.
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#dialogue
#fiction
#food
#haiku
#temptation
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Re. While I Was Having My Lunch
DaVinci_07
(Leo)
25th Jan 2021 6:48pm
Did it bring you to her yard?
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Re: Re. While I Was Having My Lunch
Green_Arrow
26th Jan 2021 1:57am
Actually, this poem is a fictional one... but thanks for the comment, anyway.
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