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Adrenaline
The rush of adrenaline when I again see your face
Warming my heart on a cold winter's day
Feelings and words that must remain unspoken
To avoid more hearts being broken
Published 17th Jan 2021
Author's Note
The sad experience of being placed into the Friend Zone after having hoped for a better result 😒😁
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
17th Jan 2021 8:40pm
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22nd Aug 2021 6:34pm
17th Jan 2021 8:47pm
Felt your pain but from pain comes the gain of a better day and way. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, oral
22nd Aug 2021 6:35pm
18th Jan 2021 3:08am
Dear I,
I am sorry. The disappointment and heartbreak of being “friended” is awful for lack of a better adjective. Having lived a similar situation, sadly more than once, I have never received any words that made me feel better upon reflection. After reading your wonderful poem I wished I’d had this years ago. Your last two lines are so loving and conscious and careful not hurt others. A gift of compassion I wish I had. Great write. H🌷
I am sorry. The disappointment and heartbreak of being “friended” is awful for lack of a better adjective. Having lived a similar situation, sadly more than once, I have never received any words that made me feel better upon reflection. After reading your wonderful poem I wished I’d had this years ago. Your last two lines are so loving and conscious and careful not hurt others. A gift of compassion I wish I had. Great write. H🌷
22nd Aug 2021 6:32pm
21st Jan 2021 12:16pm
Love the last line. But, broken hearts seems inevitable in love. Keep writing.
22nd Aug 2021 6:36pm
26th Jan 2021 5:16pm
22nd Aug 2021 6:37pm
26th Jan 2021 6:11pm
Adrenaline - a great word describing that new or potential love feeling. Friend zone - Like accelerating to get on the highway and boom you are out of gas, and need to pull off to the side.
22nd Aug 2021 6:38pm
25th Feb 2021 10:09pm
Dear Igraine, I am 100% empathetic to every word of this beautiful verse. I love the rhyming and I marvel at how you deliver an important life lesson using just a few perfectly selected and arranged words. Thank you for a truly pleasurable read❣️❣️
BTW, I am a permanent resident of the friend-zone , in fact I am running for mayor and would appreciate your vote 🙃🤠
BTW, I am a permanent resident of the friend-zone , in fact I am running for mayor and would appreciate your vote 🙃🤠
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26th Feb 2024 6:03pm
Ooh, many of us can relate to this. It's a difficult spot to be in knowing in your heart things could have been beautiful and yet the other person didn't feel the same.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
