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Hrmmm
“Quit while you’re ahead”
She said
Which came as a relief
I thought I was behind
But my anxiety was brief
That’s the story
So it goes
The tale of her and me
One step forward one step back
Consistent inconsistency
She said
Which came as a relief
I thought I was behind
But my anxiety was brief
That’s the story
So it goes
The tale of her and me
One step forward one step back
Consistent inconsistency
Published 16th Jan 2021
Author's Note
Asked a friend for a prompt and she gave me the last line.
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16th Jan 2021 2:32am
16th Jan 2021 2:42am
16th Jan 2021 3:32am
Dear K,
You are quite the humorist. I love the first stanza for its innocent repartee. I love the second stanza for its metaphor and point of remaining put. Maybe not getting ahead but thankfully not falling behind.
H🌷
You are quite the humorist. I love the first stanza for its innocent repartee. I love the second stanza for its metaphor and point of remaining put. Maybe not getting ahead but thankfully not falling behind.
H🌷
16th Jan 2021 4:03am
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17th Jan 2021 9:45pm
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2021 10:46pm
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