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You think you're special
But you're not
In a sea of a thousand
You’re just another
Notch
Ridin’ the rhythm
While it’s hot
Give it to me baby
til you give me all you got
Next in line
come up and take your spot
What’s your name again baby I forgot
But you're not
In a sea of a thousand
You’re just another
Notch
Ridin’ the rhythm
While it’s hot
Give it to me baby
til you give me all you got
Next in line
come up and take your spot
What’s your name again baby I forgot
Published 7th Jan 2021
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7th Jan 2021 8:07pm
I love poems that provoke thought. The kind that make me just uncontrollably reach for that phone....
Reminds me of this time riding in my boyfriend's car as he was giving me his layers (yeah that's plural)of names....and thinking to myself. Someone with that same name beat the love out of me. Prior. And I would never call them by their real name.
Reminds me of this time riding in my boyfriend's car as he was giving me his layers (yeah that's plural)of names....and thinking to myself. Someone with that same name beat the love out of me. Prior. And I would never call them by their real name.
8th Jan 2021 11:39am
7th Jan 2021 9:10pm
8th Jan 2021 11:38am
