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31st Dec 2020 2:07am
31st Dec 2020 2:12am
I’m seeing a promise dizzzzy. Just not sure if I want it. Lol. Thanking you.
31st Dec 2020 2:47am
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6th Aug 2021 10:51am
It kinda wrote itself BC. I don’t generally haiku but I thought an honour of Miss Chi. She loves a haiku. Thank you brother.
1st Jan 2021 4:11pm
really clever in such short lines. conveys a futility when the odds are stacked against you and/or surrounded by disloyal slimy "snake" people. although i've got nothing personal against the animals.
really good to see your work again
really good to see your work again
6th Aug 2021 10:53am
Good to see you Anna. As we know sometimes less is more and we all know this one. Always good to see you miss grin. Thank you.
3rd Jan 2021 7:53am
Maybe you should try a rope with a pulley system? lol... short but packing a big punch bro!
6th Aug 2021 10:55am
Brother Po. I’ve always been a fan of a gadget for a complicated apparatus a pulley system sounds like it’s worth a shot. Would you know you’re still rocking along brother. You are always appreciated my friend.
