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'Till the Room Starts to Burn......
Yes
she wet
but damn she sho' is tight
I got a long, black billy,
fuck and fight wit her ass
all damn night
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
….bitch
I ain't said shit
slapped me 'cross my face
(that violent insanity done made her box start to ooze and twitch)
my dick so damned hard
cramped up in these tight jeans
humpin' her body
up against the wall
grindin' and smackin' dat azz
(a low down and dirty scene......have mercy)
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
hip shot action,
daddy damn sho' is “packin' “
short, pleated skirt up 'round her waist
squeezin' that soft, naked ass
cool wall pressed all up against her angel face
big, black mamba all up
in between those thighs
bumpin' that hot, young ass
tellin' all them damn "old man" lies
Sista' and Fella'
sho' nuff bringin' the heat
bumpin' and grindin'
that tender, young pussy meat
(screamin' "my neck, my back-lick my pussy and my crack.....")
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
she wet
but damn she sho' is tight
I got a long, black billy,
fuck and fight wit her ass
all damn night
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
….bitch
I ain't said shit
slapped me 'cross my face
(that violent insanity done made her box start to ooze and twitch)
my dick so damned hard
cramped up in these tight jeans
humpin' her body
up against the wall
grindin' and smackin' dat azz
(a low down and dirty scene......have mercy)
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
hip shot action,
daddy damn sho' is “packin' “
short, pleated skirt up 'round her waist
squeezin' that soft, naked ass
cool wall pressed all up against her angel face
big, black mamba all up
in between those thighs
bumpin' that hot, young ass
tellin' all them damn "old man" lies
Sista' and Fella'
sho' nuff bringin' the heat
bumpin' and grindin'
that tender, young pussy meat
(screamin' "my neck, my back-lick my pussy and my crack.....")
until this anger subsides
and the peace returns
We'll be making love
till the room starts to burn......
Published 30th Dec 2020
Author's Note
........quenching the anger an urban style #slowscrewagainstthewall
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30th Dec 2020 5:53am
.....sometimes you can stumble out of your element, get caught up in a strange sort of flow and then.......there you go. This was one of such moments 😏
30th Dec 2020 6:27am
......this groove fit's this ink spill https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dE6GfLt72LE "Hot and Cold"
31st Dec 2020 1:08am
WOW! This was a great poem...started an UP...thanks for sharing. Peace, oral
14th Feb 2021 2:46am
“until this anger subsides “ I feel like this in another form is found in a song I like, but I can’t recall which one.
I like the way you hint at how factors beyond the two involved have an impact.
I like the way you hint at how factors beyond the two involved have an impact.
16th Mar 2021 6:08am
The title led me to think up this rhyme which could sum up what went on:
'Till the room starts to burn
with what for which I yearn
each time we are apart,
each following their heart.
'Till the room starts to burn
with what for which I yearn
each time we are apart,
each following their heart.
