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absolute grey
I'm going to stay here
a little while longer,
smoke,
and watch the grey
skies hold the sadness
of this world like a mother
weeping for a lost child.
Published 24th Dec 2020
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24th Dec 2020 9:00pm
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24th Dec 2020 9:16pm
24th Dec 2020 9:26pm
Such a sad metaphorical reference, Kitts.
Here's hoping for blue skies and better days ahead, my friend.
xo
Here's hoping for blue skies and better days ahead, my friend.
xo
25th Dec 2020 1:49am
24th Dec 2020 9:39pm
Its simple they all wanna read of your pain. Everyone how I was done. Solution? Fuck no. But they will drop hints to spin ya.....I look at it this way. If they got more info to my mental illness than I do. That shows they were a big part in creating that mental illness
25th Dec 2020 7:28am
Dear BK,
Well you’re not going to smoke alone. Light me up for heaven sake. It is very grey right now. Your poem so succinctly and rightly expresses the grief of the universe. But depending on what we’re smoking...we can change those grey skies to blue. Xo
H🌷
Well you’re not going to smoke alone. Light me up for heaven sake. It is very grey right now. Your poem so succinctly and rightly expresses the grief of the universe. But depending on what we’re smoking...we can change those grey skies to blue. Xo
H🌷
25th Dec 2020 4:55pm
LOL. Haven't smoked any like that in decades, but you make a very good point.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
