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Dreams
What makes a person
Lose faith of a dream
When that dream is not realised
For what it really seems
Take these dreams
And hold on tight
Even if it's in
The middle of the night
Lose faith of a dream
When that dream is not realised
For what it really seems
Take these dreams
And hold on tight
Even if it's in
The middle of the night
Published 20th Dec 2020
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20th Dec 2020 2:12pm
Dear S,
Hmmm. I’d usually just think to give up on said dream. You’re suggesting to hang onto it fir reasons not yet made clear. I like where this leads and appreciate the alternate theory. Lovely write. H🌷
Hmmm. I’d usually just think to give up on said dream. You’re suggesting to hang onto it fir reasons not yet made clear. I like where this leads and appreciate the alternate theory. Lovely write. H🌷
9th Feb 2021 10:28pm
