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If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
They need deed doers more than just sayers!
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But each day that goes by tells them nobody cares;
Cake-eating suits finding such hunger rude.
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
They need deed doers more than just sayers!
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But each day that goes by tells them nobody cares;
Cake-eating suits finding such hunger rude.
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
Published 17th Dec 2020
Author's Note
My first attempt at a triolet.
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17th Dec 2020 8:17pm
This is fantastic, Kumar! It’s easy to stand on a soapbox but without any deed or action, words are just words.
I had to research triolet when I saw the comp. it would really put my brain to work.
I had to research triolet when I saw the comp. it would really put my brain to work.
17th Dec 2020 8:21pm
18th Dec 2020 00:27am
Hey! You can repost it ( I think )! Jack edited the rules ( I think )! I wasn't confused, but now I kinda am! Not over your poem, but the rules of the comp! LOL!
18th Dec 2020 1:04am
I don’t think it qualifies because it’s not in first or third person and it’s not really about someone per se (originally was a response to Edible Words but it’s pretty oblique in that regard). Thanks for the RL add!
18th Dec 2020 1:09am
It doesn't have to be about anyone anymore? I told you, his revision confused me! LOL!
