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meteo(r)oar ~ alien DNA and all it's perceived poison
I can feel the dull driving ache of your absence~
like the crush of a vacuum
That's what happens when your blown apart
by a meteor
Alien, in all it's perceived eloquence;
Perceptions aren't truths known,
they're flashes of unsubstantiated
Yet a flash was all I needed.
Unexpectedness of the immediate,
mixed with a deep seeded desire to know more Created the perfect explosion
I AM your beautifully damaged aftermath.
Your alien DNA roared,
and most certainly became an elixir
of which my mind and body
adamantly require(d)
I crave it still ~
Always
Immune to all of your so called poison,
Even battered by our shared foreign language or
thoughts of alien miscommunication,
Oh how I understand in one single instant,
what I should've only been only able to guess at,
taking my entire current lifetime, in guesses-
Perhaps to know, God was once in existence...
...if only I believed in such tales
Published 15th Dec 2020
Author's Note
©Blu2020
pic: titled "Vapor" via Pinterest
pic: titled "Vapor" via Pinterest
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15th Dec 2020 10:16pm
Intriguing piece, Blue. I've read it three times and glean a different meaning with each pass...I love a mystery. The lined out "I crave" ('s) makes evokes the idea of uncertainty or real-time vacillation while writing. Thanks for the think 💚
15th Dec 2020 11:39pm
I don't really even know what it's about....
It's sadness about unrequited love and the effects of such pain.... or it's about WANTING so badly that you're ok with results that might end badly. Ardent Desire and tremendous need....
I suppose.... maybe?!!?
Lmao!
Ty for reading and trying to decipher..I'm extremely thankful for you.
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
It's sadness about unrequited love and the effects of such pain.... or it's about WANTING so badly that you're ok with results that might end badly. Ardent Desire and tremendous need....
I suppose.... maybe?!!?
Lmao!
Ty for reading and trying to decipher..I'm extremely thankful for you.
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
15th Dec 2020 10:44pm
15th Dec 2020 11:43pm
15th Dec 2020 11:35pm
Woman are from Venus men are from Mars no wonder there's a struggle to understand the other spieces lol
But I guess not knowing makes you more hungry to understand
Love and light
Ron x
But I guess not knowing makes you more hungry to understand
Love and light
Ron x
Exactly, Ron!!
Plus, isn't it always the case where we really really want what we can't have??!?!!?
Your comments nailed it. I should always know, you'd get it Ty for sharing your amazing thoughts and ideas... and the RL add 🙏
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
Plus, isn't it always the case where we really really want what we can't have??!?!!?
Your comments nailed it. I should always know, you'd get it Ty for sharing your amazing thoughts and ideas... and the RL add 🙏
💜 💜 💜
xoxo
B
15th Dec 2020 11:54pm
BV, I am drawn in by this thought provoking write. Love is as rare as a crushing meteor leaving its perpetual mark. Both share an impact that can last forever. Take it from a guy who has taken a direct hit, LOL. Loneliness is a reminder of how much we value love. A Crafty & Painfully Gripping Write Bluevelvete!
16th Dec 2020 1:37am
Ty so much for reading, you truly are a real gem.
LONELINESS.... ugggh!!! grrrrr....
I am over being so fucking lonely, that's for sure. Sorry for the crude, cut to the chase, but that's it, in a nutshell.... I'm always so grateful for your eloquently written feedback. I apologize mine
aren't up to snuff, tonight. I really do thank you for all the kindness you've shown me.
🌹
xo
B
LONELINESS.... ugggh!!! grrrrr....
I am over being so fucking lonely, that's for sure. Sorry for the crude, cut to the chase, but that's it, in a nutshell.... I'm always so grateful for your eloquently written feedback. I apologize mine
aren't up to snuff, tonight. I really do thank you for all the kindness you've shown me.
🌹
xo
B
16th Dec 2020 2:12am
16th Dec 2020 2:19am
30th May 2023 5:21pm
Alien, in all it's perceived eloquence;
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dear Velvete
this line speaks so clearly for the quest to find one's path
a warm smile
silent lotus
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
dear Velvete
this line speaks so clearly for the quest to find one's path
a warm smile
silent lotus
`
30th May 2023 10:02pm
You're a majestic presence, dear SL.
Thank you for delving into my older thoughts and feelings to leave your insightful takeaway from this long forgotten piece .. It's not a favorite poem of mine but I love and deeply appreciate seeing it as a stepping stone of poetic learning, one that I was lucky enough to make which has gotten me to this point of my creative journey.
Glad you felt something from reading...
Much obliged, dear poet.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
-B
Thank you for delving into my older thoughts and feelings to leave your insightful takeaway from this long forgotten piece .. It's not a favorite poem of mine but I love and deeply appreciate seeing it as a stepping stone of poetic learning, one that I was lucky enough to make which has gotten me to this point of my creative journey.
Glad you felt something from reading...
Much obliged, dear poet.
It's always a pleasure to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
-B
