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Mysteries
mysteries unveiling
following deep
spaces unkown
forgetting reasoning
only subliminal
feeling future
alchemically destinies
malleable might be
shaping stars
time and space
eternity
past present future
forging thoughts unthought
defending for against
mind alterations projections
turning lead gold shimmerings
following deep
spaces unkown
forgetting reasoning
only subliminal
feeling future
alchemically destinies
malleable might be
shaping stars
time and space
eternity
past present future
forging thoughts unthought
defending for against
mind alterations projections
turning lead gold shimmerings
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Mystery
5th Feb 2012 00:21am
What can I say hummm. Got it. A lot of the fun lies in trying to penetrate the mystery; and this is best done by saying over the lines to yourself again and again, till they pass through the stage of sounding like nonsense, and finally return to a full sense that had at first escaped notice. Great poem. A+
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re: Mystery
7th Feb 2012 7:38pm
Thank you very much. I know you the way you tried to make sense of it was the right way. Your critique means a lot to me so thank you also for the A+. Most of my poems tend to be pretty clear as to their meaning but sometimes I like writing poems such as this one where the meaning isn't understood quite as easily. :)
Thanks for the interesting
5th Feb 2012 5:00pm
Secrets
Many of the secrets is still far
And many of the secrets come close
And many of the secrets revealed
With a lot of research
In unknown
And mysterious
After deep
And travel
Spiritual
And material
And physical
Unknown areas
Sea of uncertainty
Ocean of knowledge
Forgetting logic
Only camouflage
Those who do not know
Those who do not have a science
Or estimated
Sense of the future
Good thing
With access to the source of ambiguity
Kingdom of mystery
There are queen of the ambiguity
Its name, the Queen of Mystery
We have a lot of speculative philosophy
alchemically destinies
Practiced in the Middle Ages
And the Renaissance,
Interested in the first place ...
Perhaps there are a lot of ambiguitymalleable
The formation of stars
Or Orb
Or abandoned by the galaxy
Time and place
His own
And eternity
Past present future
It is useful
She knows in advance his
Anonymous fraud ideas
Learn his
The defense of many antibody
Logic
And the power of ambiguity
Gates with speculative philosophy
Amendments to the mind expectations
Shimmerings turning gold lead
Join the trip comes in Shimmerlings .. ...
Start a blog!
Flash Billings strongly Queen of Astronomy
With the strength, contemplative
Thank you
Powerful poem
I know the sky and the ambiguity of astronomy and the universe
Thank you ..
Akhenaten, Egypt
On February 05 ** 2012 after Birth
Many of the secrets is still far
And many of the secrets come close
And many of the secrets revealed
With a lot of research
In unknown
And mysterious
After deep
And travel
Spiritual
And material
And physical
Unknown areas
Sea of uncertainty
Ocean of knowledge
Forgetting logic
Only camouflage
Those who do not know
Those who do not have a science
Or estimated
Sense of the future
Good thing
With access to the source of ambiguity
Kingdom of mystery
There are queen of the ambiguity
Its name, the Queen of Mystery
We have a lot of speculative philosophy
alchemically destinies
Practiced in the Middle Ages
And the Renaissance,
Interested in the first place ...
Perhaps there are a lot of ambiguitymalleable
The formation of stars
Or Orb
Or abandoned by the galaxy
Time and place
His own
And eternity
Past present future
It is useful
She knows in advance his
Anonymous fraud ideas
Learn his
The defense of many antibody
Logic
And the power of ambiguity
Gates with speculative philosophy
Amendments to the mind expectations
Shimmerings turning gold lead
Join the trip comes in Shimmerlings .. ...
Start a blog!
Flash Billings strongly Queen of Astronomy
With the strength, contemplative
Thank you
Powerful poem
I know the sky and the ambiguity of astronomy and the universe
Thank you ..
Akhenaten, Egypt
On February 05 ** 2012 after Birth
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Thank you Akhenaten!
7th Feb 2012 7:41pm
Thank you my king. I know you understand and I appreciate your understanding always.
You are a bright star in the universe!
Be blessed
much love always
Your queen
You are a bright star in the universe!
Be blessed
much love always
Your queen
YOUR POEM WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND
Anonymous
19th Mar 2012 9:57pm
very enjoyable...thank you for writing this little gem
Kitty
Kitty
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re: YOUR POEM WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND
29th Mar 2012 5:32am
I am happy that you thought it was an enjoyable little gem. It's nice when people respond to poetry so thank you for your thoughtful comment.
Secrets
22nd Mar 2012 6:00pm
Many of the secrets
Written on the walls of my heart
Between columns of body
Many of the patterns and hieroglyphs
Secrets revealed
After time
After deep
Among the ruins of the past
Entities and the future
Feelings between the walls
Unknown areas
And in the rooms of conscience
Many of the signs
And light
Forgetting logic
There are a lot of sense
And always the way
Only camouflage
But love
Challenge
Gives a lot of sense
Sense of the future
alchemically destinies
Whether a universal
Or ground
Or physical
Are in the end
Secrets
May be softer
The formation of stars
Time and place
Immortality
Immortality for all
Between the transparent wall
The wall of Muharram
Exchange dialogue
And we want to help
Or help
Past present future
The contrary, always
There Quote
There are raking
Anonymous fraud ideas
Required
To rest the mind
Conscience
The body
The defense of antibody
Amendments to the mind expectations
Shimmerings turning gold lead
To kill
Love Werewolf
Sweet poem
You write in a way Queen of the Universe
I see Your throne
I feel your
Know how to
Always wait for you
In the forest
Between the moon
And trees
I hear your steps
When close to the lake
I'm with moments of sweet sunset
Wait for you
In love
Know how to
Mysteries
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"Love you"
24th Mar 2012 4:14am
Many riddles but I know you understand my poem and I love you for that (among other things)
My favorite words here:
"Wait for you
in love
Know how to
Mysteries"
Yours truly
you know who :)
My favorite words here:
"Wait for you
in love
Know how to
Mysteries"
Yours truly
you know who :)
Hmm!
27th Mar 2012 7:50pm
At the risk of showing my nerdiness, I can't help but think of Doctor Who and Carl Sagan looking at this!
Also reminds me of Al Stewart's music.
Also reminds me of Al Stewart's music.
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re: Hmm!
29th Mar 2012 5:31am
Interesting that you should mention Carl Sagan.
I find him interesting and enjoy reading what he has to say.
And I don't think you are nerdy at all.
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
I find him interesting and enjoy reading what he has to say.
And I don't think you are nerdy at all.
Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
re: re: Hmm!
29th Mar 2012 7:14pm
Well I didn't consider myself among the ranks of nerds until I heard one of those "You know you are a (fill in the blank) if you (fill in the blank) jokes! "Broca's Brain" was a present from my mom that she gave me upon finding out I was accepted to the university I had my heart set on.
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re: re: re: Hmm!
30th Mar 2012 3:51am
Being accepted to the university that you have your heart set on is always a very good thing. I don't know how long ago that happened but Congratulations!