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Now you are amaized.
Now you are amaized, at me
When I’ve been more
Steped on than a
Carpet, more humiliated
Than a slave, and more
Mistreated than a head nail.
I see it, now you want to be
Part of me, remember when
I was asking for food, and drink
And something to eat,Where were you?
Now you are with somebody else,
But who is with him? Because
You are not even with your self.
I had to learn so many things
That life hit me with, I had
To learn how to smile, I did not
Need to learn how to cry, because
That you are born knowing.
Besides you always saying
I was crazy, because I just to
Walk with a copy book, writing
Shit, and describing people,
No knowing most of the things
I wrote were important for my
Book, and if you ever read my
Book, you will see it was all about you.
R.Sena[i][/i]
When I’ve been more
Steped on than a
Carpet, more humiliated
Than a slave, and more
Mistreated than a head nail.
I see it, now you want to be
Part of me, remember when
I was asking for food, and drink
And something to eat,Where were you?
Now you are with somebody else,
But who is with him? Because
You are not even with your self.
I had to learn so many things
That life hit me with, I had
To learn how to smile, I did not
Need to learn how to cry, because
That you are born knowing.
Besides you always saying
I was crazy, because I just to
Walk with a copy book, writing
Shit, and describing people,
No knowing most of the things
I wrote were important for my
Book, and if you ever read my
Book, you will see it was all about you.
R.Sena[i][/i]
Published 4th Feb 2012
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4th Feb 2012 6:13pm
This an honest and wonderful little poem, that cuts write to the core with out all the flowery crap. I had a problem with some of the minor grammar mistakes at first but after a couple reads they make the poem even better because the reader can gear your real voice void of pretentious editing
4th Feb 2012 10:57pm
i really like the way i write, i have to tell you the true, if some one ask me, do i read books and stuff? no, i dont, thats why i have an unique way of writing, i dont know how to do it, the way somebody else does,. i do have some mistake, but inglish is my third language, so i try. thanks.
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