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Places
Places you said you’d take me:
Door County
The Rose Garden
Your Home Town
France
Mexico
Greece
Book Stores
Coffee Shops
Seattle
Places you took me:
A Dark Place
A Low Point
Places you left me:
Alone
Door County
The Rose Garden
Your Home Town
France
Mexico
Greece
Book Stores
Coffee Shops
Seattle
Places you took me:
A Dark Place
A Low Point
Places you left me:
Alone
Published 7th Dec 2020
Author's Note
I guess I just liked you more...
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7th Dec 2020 4:53am
Wow, Layla! This really is an introspective piece for me. When I think of all the promises either implicit or explicit that I have been unable to fulfill is a great source of shame. I Sam sorry that your dreams did not materialize. You'll find that promise keep'n Dreamweaver😍
7th Dec 2020 5:43am
7th Dec 2020 9:49am
30th Apr 2021 6:11am
2nd Aug 2021 11:27am
Interesting
The mature attitude that comes through is inspirational
It would be safe to say that you have moved on
Now there all those exciting possibilities up ahead
Congratulations
The mature attitude that comes through is inspirational
It would be safe to say that you have moved on
Now there all those exciting possibilities up ahead
Congratulations
