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Tasting Him
Umm, make me scream as never before, as I’ve never felt
When the thrust of his raw passion makes me so wet
Mind to mind, body to body as our souls are gyrating as we melt
Creaming all over you, bucking on his arousal as I move
My mouth coveting his carnal greed
Unmercifully siphoning his manhood from my fetish feed
Mm... baby... can I have some more of your needs
Fingering myslef, pussy soaking beyond the wet
His grunts urging my climax on
His head bobbling back
Retreating.. pushing me backwards.. my spine gracing the sheet
My pussy invaded by his arousal greet
Legs in the air, pounding my chasm of my snatch
Taking it back then hammering
Pulling him down on top of me, wrapping my legs around his back
Cum dammit
Oh yes… uprating, his dick inside me slamming
My climax gushed mm.. he's rammming
Oh yeah baby that’s what I what to fill
His family jewels begin to drill
Cupping my ass, his groin to my pelvic
When the thrust of his raw passion makes me so wet
Mind to mind, body to body as our souls are gyrating as we melt
Creaming all over you, bucking on his arousal as I move
My mouth coveting his carnal greed
Unmercifully siphoning his manhood from my fetish feed
Mm... baby... can I have some more of your needs
Fingering myslef, pussy soaking beyond the wet
His grunts urging my climax on
His head bobbling back
Retreating.. pushing me backwards.. my spine gracing the sheet
My pussy invaded by his arousal greet
Legs in the air, pounding my chasm of my snatch
Taking it back then hammering
Pulling him down on top of me, wrapping my legs around his back
Cum dammit
Oh yes… uprating, his dick inside me slamming
My climax gushed mm.. he's rammming
Oh yeah baby that’s what I what to fill
His family jewels begin to drill
Cupping my ass, his groin to my pelvic
Published 7th Dec 2020
| Edited 20th Aug 2021
Author's Note
I've always felt that poetry was particularly erotic, more than prose was... I say that you read poems not with your eyes and not with your ears, but with your mouth. You taste it.
Donald Hall
Donald Hall
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Hot picture would them undies for me. You are turning me on, because I'm on fire. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
8th Dec 2020 11:55pm
What a hot comment my handsome poet, and thank you for such a sizzling effect. In addition, for reading and commenting I am extending to you a great evening and very nice Hump Day as well
9th Dec 2020 3:27am
7th Dec 2020 4:19am
sensual spill sweet to read the taste is sweet my eyes linger on the canvas of these sweet words
9th Dec 2020 00:08am
Oh.. I admire... all your words that begin with the letter, 'S'.. making making me all soft .. thank my friend... you always know the sexy serenade to say. Thank you for reading and do enjoy your evening and a sensual Hump Day may you slide into
9th Dec 2020 00:58am
7th Dec 2020 6:10am
9th Dec 2020 00:23am
Mouth makes rim
Mm.. pleasing his rising nature into my mouth as his pearly essence swim
tasting him
Drools slipping down my chin on a whim
to his brim
Mm.. satisfaction is the melody of its beautiful hymm
Thank you my wise poet.. for reading and the enticing comment. I love your summary, enjoy your Hump Day on your early morning in the UK😊
Mm.. pleasing his rising nature into my mouth as his pearly essence swim
tasting him
Drools slipping down my chin on a whim
to his brim
Mm.. satisfaction is the melody of its beautiful hymm
Thank you my wise poet.. for reading and the enticing comment. I love your summary, enjoy your Hump Day on your early morning in the UK😊
Anonymous
7th Dec 2020 4:40pm
What you did to me is completely unfair. I am wandering, wondering, trying to figure out if there is a woman in my life that can make me feel this way. "mind to mind, body to body" - that is the ultimate state of fucking. Complete abandon and trust. "Butter rum drips" - please.....stop. My mouth is watering. You describe sucking dick almost as a religious experience, unlike the typical "doing what I gotta do" bullshit.
I am out of words. Dizzy with desire.
This is awesome.
I am out of words. Dizzy with desire.
This is awesome.
9th Dec 2020 00:32am
Mm... you know you had me hello my love... What a succulent comment even I can taste the wet appetite of its fruitful merriment, this poetess bows her head to you in appreciation, and be advised I will coming to scribble all over your naked canvas as time would allow. I am wishing you a super duper evening and an enticing Hump Day🐾🐾
11th Dec 2020 1:42am
......you (your words) keep this king in a constant state of intent arousal. Imaging that only an opening stanza causes my jeans to tighten; I loosen them to lighten my load. dripping clearly......you are my desire. sucking, fucking, licking and sticking. Always posed with class and intellect and with all due respect, I truly want to lick you, dick you down. In words and music 🍆💦 (that's what they do to me)
"M"
"M"
12th Dec 2020 4:12am
Mmm... how sweet it is my chocolate drop, and thank you for scribbling that beautiful gem of a comment on my canvas. Please enjoy your late evening and have a great weekend as well
