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THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
Do I love trouble?
Who doesn’t love a good spirit,
Knowing it’s poison?
I will drink to our pleasure
(And reflect at my leisure)
Who doesn’t love a good spirit,
Knowing it’s poison?
I will drink to our pleasure
(And reflect at my leisure)
Author's Note
Poem topic inspired by Myanus, poem form inspired by Ahavati.
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Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:29pm
Hahaha! BRAVO! Well done on accepting the challenge! I LOVE tanka's! Thanks for the shout-out!
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Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:31pm
Yay. You're welcome, and thanks. And also, thank you for humoring my anemone comment. I didn't know there was a flower called an anemone, so in part it was an extension of my initial confusion.
Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:37pm
No worries! I loved it. I haven't gotten around to answering those comments yet! I have to split time: comment on others or my own! You understand.
Anemone is a very late-blooming Japanese flower ( thus the form too ) that is grown worldwide. But they will always remind me of Japan due to their paper-like petals.
Anemone is a very late-blooming Japanese flower ( thus the form too ) that is grown worldwide. But they will always remind me of Japan due to their paper-like petals.
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Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:40pm
Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:42pm
I connect with all things Asian! Well, most things! I don't eat new-born rats alive; nor cats or dogs ( but I am a vegetarian, so. . .). For the most part I connect with many rituals and feel drawn to the culture.
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Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 7:43pm
Can you recommend specific poems of yours that like that one will take me there? I liked that feeling.
Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 8:56pm
Oh shoot; I have a few but cannot for the life of me remember their titles. I'm starting four series that will be riddled with Asian formats:
Crystallary ( sacred crystals )
Beastiary ( sacred animals )
Herbiary ( medicinals )
Blossomary ( flowers )
Just watch for those and there'll be more.
Crystallary ( sacred crystals )
Beastiary ( sacred animals )
Herbiary ( medicinals )
Blossomary ( flowers )
Just watch for those and there'll be more.
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Re: Re. THE TROUBLE I HAVE IN ME
3rd Dec 2020 8:59pm
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