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One down, the rest to go.
I’m finally and truly HAPPY.
Not sure who loved who FIRST.
We’ve come through a YEAR of trials.
You’ve broken every barrier in MY heart. You’ll always be my peacemaking DOVE.
Our first year has been shitty
for the whole world. Funny....
it's been amazing for me.
I love you Mrs Wilson.
Not sure who loved who FIRST.
We’ve come through a YEAR of trials.
You’ve broken every barrier in MY heart. You’ll always be my peacemaking DOVE.
Our first year has been shitty
for the whole world. Funny....
it's been amazing for me.
I love you Mrs Wilson.
Published 3rd Dec 2020
| Edited 15th Aug 2021
Author's Note
We were married in December of 2019. Then COVID happened. Best year of life, until the next one.
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3rd Dec 2020 1:48pm
What a beautiful tribute to your love. I really like how you built that small message into the poem. Very creative.
3rd Dec 2020 5:44pm
4th Dec 2020 3:15am
25th Feb 2021 11:15am
Very lyrical, flowed well when read in my head. I don't like your use of "though" It didn't sound right when I spoke it out loud. James
2nd Mar 2021 6:46am
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