I enjoy how you spilled this piece nicely composed you subconsciously open up the subconsciousness of the mind with subliminal messages rushing through the stairways and gateways of the gates of the heart and soul and mind respect dear poetess my only advice is you should speak alittle louder the volume sounds low project your tone be heard with your voice other for you have the power within you other than that it's beautifully composed respect poet dear poetess