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Rest In Peace
I just buried
Another failed relationship
R.I.P.
It started out fun
Like romances always
Seem to do
But the more I knew about
The man, the less
I cared for him
I'm proud of myself
For once seeing
A relationship for
What it was and
Not for what
I wanted it to be
And having the strength
To let go of it
Before it killed my
Self esteem and
Self tespect
Another failed relationship
R.I.P.
It started out fun
Like romances always
Seem to do
But the more I knew about
The man, the less
I cared for him
I'm proud of myself
For once seeing
A relationship for
What it was and
Not for what
I wanted it to be
And having the strength
To let go of it
Before it killed my
Self esteem and
Self tespect
Published 2nd Dec 2020
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3rd Dec 2020 1:56pm
Thank you so much for your response to my poem including the technical issue/issues. Please feel free to comment on them if you like. I am interested in knowing what bothers you so to speak regarding them. If you would be more comfortable sending your thoughts through a private message that would be fine as well.
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3rd Dec 2020 3:58pm
Hi, there! Thank you for responding so quick to my question. I appreciate you clarifying things for me. Now, I understand. I really appreciate your kind words and I'm happy that you like my work.
10th Dec 2020 10:58pm
So many can identify with this one, hanging on to a relationship for all the wrong reasons until it really causes real damage. Great write. I hope that now you find what you are looking for and deserve.
12th Dec 2020 12:44pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Kristina! I appreciate them very much.
14th Dec 2020 5:06am
Dear FM,
I think it probably doesn’t hurt any less to end a relationship however, there is a particular satisfaction, as well as an immense relief in knowing you didnt live within a fantasy. Then go back and be annoyed with yourself that you knew all along it was doomed but lived in hope...ugh! How many times I’ve done that! I’m proud of you too. I admire greatly the direct speech of this write and even more its message. Great write. H🌷
I think it probably doesn’t hurt any less to end a relationship however, there is a particular satisfaction, as well as an immense relief in knowing you didnt live within a fantasy. Then go back and be annoyed with yourself that you knew all along it was doomed but lived in hope...ugh! How many times I’ve done that! I’m proud of you too. I admire greatly the direct speech of this write and even more its message. Great write. H🌷
18th Dec 2020 9:50pm
Thank you so much, my wonderful friend! Your comments made my day! Happy holidays to you!
30th Dec 2020 11:38am
31st Dec 2020 8:06am
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I really appreciate it! Happy New Year!
