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Why
Why does your absence hurt me so?
When you weren't ever really there.
Why does your silence hurt me so?
When all you spoke were lies.
Why do you visit my dreams?
When you broke all of mines.
Why do you consume my thoughts?
When you vanished me from yours.
Why did I let you touch my soul?
When I knew you would leave me broken.
When you weren't ever really there.
Why does your silence hurt me so?
When all you spoke were lies.
Why do you visit my dreams?
When you broke all of mines.
Why do you consume my thoughts?
When you vanished me from yours.
Why did I let you touch my soul?
When I knew you would leave me broken.
Published 3rd Feb 2012
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3rd Feb 2012 8:51pm
man a question ive asked myself so many times! i can really relate. good job!
3rd Feb 2012 11:54pm
3rd Feb 2012 11:52pm
very beautiful and heart felt...but i feel like it is lacking a finality...some form of ending...i feel that it was cut short before it was finished
3rd Feb 2012 11:55pm
I feel the same. I always have a hard time with the endings most times I'll drag it on and on so I just cut it short so it wont be so long. Something I need to work on. Thanks for your feedback :-)
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