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LONG RIVER
Finally
We have ridden
That long river
Of golden thread
To the land of
No-longer-here
A wonderful place
Drifting further
Into space
Every year
We have ridden
That long river
Of golden thread
To the land of
No-longer-here
A wonderful place
Drifting further
Into space
Every year
Published 24th Nov 2020
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24th Nov 2020 9:41pm
24th Nov 2020 10:32pm
25th Nov 2020 2:20am
Dear S,
“To the land of no longer there”. Brilliant. I don’t know why that happens, when something I’ve remembered so fondly has changed so drastically. Or it was I who changed so drastically. But there is sadness and loss when it happens for sure. Melancholy and lovely write. H 🌷
“To the land of no longer there”. Brilliant. I don’t know why that happens, when something I’ve remembered so fondly has changed so drastically. Or it was I who changed so drastically. But there is sadness and loss when it happens for sure. Melancholy and lovely write. H 🌷
25th Nov 2020 2:29am
25th Nov 2020 1:38pm
Hmm, I sort of take this piece as being something good. Leaving behind the old and walking into the new.
"To the land of no-longer-here
A wonderful place" --feels like a great escape.
"To the land of no-longer-here
A wonderful place" --feels like a great escape.
25th Nov 2020 3:04pm
